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Array ( [sid] => 124070 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Am I Invisible? [time] => 2006-08-04 04:18:21 [hometext] => am i still invisible to you? [bodytext] => you thaught I was
invisible
till the day you recognized me
I let you walk all over me
you thaught I was
invisible
well look at me now
you thaught you knew me
I let you walk all over me
I never thaught you noticed me
I never thaught you cared
you just walked all over me
till the day you recognized me
you thaught I was
invisible

just another girl
I let you walk all over me
I never thaught you noticed me
I never thaught you cared
look at me now
am I invisible?
just look at me now

you thaught you knew me
but you looked strait through me
you never
noticed me
you never even cared
I was invisible

well look at me now
am I invisible?
now you notice me
now you care
remember when
you thaught I was
invisible
look at me now
am I invisible?
just look at me now

you looked straight through me
just another girl
never thaught you would
notice me
you never even cared
to you
I was invisible

well just look at me now
am I invisible? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 48 [informant] => The_Unknown [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Am I Invisible?

Contributed by The_Unknown on Friday, 4th August 2006 @ 04:18:21 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

you thaught I was
invisible
till the day you recognized me
I let you walk all over me
you thaught I was
invisible
well look at me now
you thaught you knew me
I let you walk all over me
I never thaught you noticed me
I never thaught you cared
you just walked all over me
till the day you recognized me
you thaught I was
invisible

just another girl
I let you walk all over me
I never thaught you noticed me
I never thaught you cared
look at me now
am I invisible?
just look at me now

you thaught you knew me
but you looked strait through me
you never
noticed me
you never even cared
I was invisible

well look at me now
am I invisible?
now you notice me
now you care
remember when
you thaught I was
invisible
look at me now
am I invisible?
just look at me now

you looked straight through me
just another girl
never thaught you would
notice me
you never even cared
to you
I was invisible

well just look at me now
am I invisible?

Copyright © The_Unknown ... [ 2006-08-04 04:18:21]
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Re: Am I Invisible? (User Rating: 1 )
by CaddishCut on Friday, 4th August 2006 @ 04:46:28 AM AEST
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Awesome write. I love the repeatediveness on this. Really gets the point across. And I feel you 100% on this one. I have been there before

Re: Am I Invisible? (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 4th August 2006 @ 11:48:20 AM AEST
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wow this is a very powerful write!! we all feel invisible at times and its sad when people ignore us when we need them to be there most.. very well expressed

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