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Array ( [sid] => 123986 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => no title [time] => 2006-08-02 00:31:22 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I slow dance with the devil
in the pale light moon
my mind focus on death
for he will be here soon
to collect what he is owe
I prepaid my toll
for I know I would
walk down this road
for this pain just consume
and I try so hard
but I don’t know what to do
I’m in a state of confusion
awaiting my doom
my eyes can only see my end
this is my world I live in
I lost all control and slipped
dam when did I get this twitch
my body has grown cold
my soul has let go
as I free fall to my end
tired of living
this life
of sin [comments] => 2 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 43 [informant] => chaos78 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

no title

Contributed by chaos78 on Wednesday, 2nd August 2006 @ 12:31:22 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I slow dance with the devil
in the pale light moon
my mind focus on death
for he will be here soon
to collect what he is owe
I prepaid my toll
for I know I would
walk down this road
for this pain just consume
and I try so hard
but I don’t know what to do
I’m in a state of confusion
awaiting my doom
my eyes can only see my end
this is my world I live in
I lost all control and slipped
dam when did I get this twitch
my body has grown cold
my soul has let go
as I free fall to my end
tired of living
this life
of sin

Copyright Â© chaos78 ... [ 2006-08-02 00:31:22]
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Re: no title (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 2nd August 2006 @ 02:28:25 PM AEST
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so emotional and sad touched with a blinding darkness to it. you did a great job with this write indeed.
Michelle

Re: no title (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 2nd August 2006 @ 10:34:05 PM AEST
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When the will dies and all hope is lost, we tend to feel like this. Such sadness and deep darkness speak from our wounded hearts. Chin up friend. I wish u all the best. A very sad, but well penned write that digs at the heart~
take care, warm hugs,
suzie Q

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