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Array ( [sid] => 123978 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A splendid beginning, A journey in love [time] => 2006-08-01 20:51:47 [hometext] => For this is dedicated to a special girl friend soon to be wed.......she is walking as one, and returning as a [bodytext] => You started as one, a fagile miss with all to offer
It now has doubled and made it two, with even greater aspects

Feelings flowed and firworks began
Now it sparks and egnites with every day they are near

Heart flutters when they speak a single word
To be together speaking many words explodes all the more

Your eyes would travel until you seen the one
Now they stay in one image that will remain

Being one is independent and in flight
Being two is greatest entwine the soul could find [comments] => 7 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 2 [informant] => brew [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

A splendid beginning, A journey in love

Contributed by brew on Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 08:51:47 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

You started as one, a fagile miss with all to offer
It now has doubled and made it two, with even greater aspects

Feelings flowed and firworks began
Now it sparks and egnites with every day they are near

Heart flutters when they speak a single word
To be together speaking many words explodes all the more

Your eyes would travel until you seen the one
Now they stay in one image that will remain

Being one is independent and in flight
Being two is greatest entwine the soul could find

Copyright Â© brew ... [ 2006-08-01 20:51:47]
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Re: A splendid beginning, A journey in love (User Rating: 1 )
by RLWildPassions on Tuesday, 8th August 2006 @ 11:59:53 PM AEST
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Brew, another great, I like it

Re: A splendid beginning, A journey in love (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Thursday, 10th August 2006 @ 09:32:00 PM AEST
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Yes, Brew, public declarations of love via marriage are powerful rites of passage and forge already strong emotions. That's why marriage as a ceremony and as a social institution is making a comeback, despite the ease with which it can be undone. I've done it twice, and I'm sure I'll do it again.

Yours in ever hopeful,

Spike

Re: A splendid beginning, A journey in love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 02:57:24 PM AEST
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aw Dayna, what a sweet sentiment for your friend.
She is lucky to have you! : )

Beautifully captured, these feelings of togetherness ..

*hugs*

~Breezy

Re: A splendid beginning, A journey in love (User Rating: 1 )
by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 01:20:36 PM AEST
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Excellent write.
Beautifully written~

Jeff

Re: A splendid beginning, A journey in love (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 08:23:16 PM AEST
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That's fantastic Dayna.. congrats to your girlfriend.. I'm sure she's proud to have this and you.

B

Re: A splendid beginning, A journey in love (User Rating: 1 )
by jyssvw22 on Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 07:27:37 PM AEST
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”Your eyes would travel until you seen the one
Now they stay in one image that will remain”

aint that the truth, you see something and you want it, nothing else will do, or matters for the moment

nice words

Re: A splendid beginning, A journey in love (User Rating: 1 )
by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on Thursday, 19th April 2007 @ 04:56:52 AM AEST
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WOW IF I KEEP READING THESE I MIGHT ACTUALLY START WRITTING BETTER

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