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Array ( [sid] => 123970 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You (put me together again) [time] => 2006-08-01 18:00:15 [hometext] => If you had told me 1 year ago, that I would be confident and post poetry on the internet, I would have laughed at you. My friend helped make me confident, and with this poem I say Thanks. Sue x [bodytext] =>
You put me on a pedestal,
You made me feel so good,
You told me that I'd conquer my fears,
Though I never thought I would,

You made my eyes see better times,
You lifted me from the doldrums,
You made me realise my faults,
You exstiinguished all my problems,

You made me look at my life,
You told me what route to take,
You showed me the error of my ways,
And how not to make mistakes,

You taught me to be confident,
You even made me smile,
You are a special person,
Who I have known for quite a while,

You said I should push myself,
You told me not to be blue,
You made me what I am today,
My friend its thanks to you.
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You (put me together again)

Contributed by jerseysue on Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 06:00:15 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

You put me on a pedestal,
You made me feel so good,
You told me that I'd conquer my fears,
Though I never thought I would,

You made my eyes see better times,
You lifted me from the doldrums,
You made me realise my faults,
You exstiinguished all my problems,

You made me look at my life,
You told me what route to take,
You showed me the error of my ways,
And how not to make mistakes,

You taught me to be confident,
You even made me smile,
You are a special person,
Who I have known for quite a while,

You said I should push myself,
You told me not to be blue,
You made me what I am today,
My friend its thanks to you.

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Re: You (put me together again) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 07:07:17 PM AEST
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Sue .. this was so heartwarming. A beautiful thank you
to a dear friend. Your gratitude and kindness
shine through in this.

Lovely ~

~Breezy

Re: You (put me together again) (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 07:38:16 PM AEST
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Sue~
It's great when we have wonderful friends who help us and stand by us through thick and thin. A beautiful poem filled with heartfelt thanks. A pleasant and most enjoyable write.
Keep up the awesome work~
love n hugs,
suzie Q

Re: You (put me together again) (User Rating: 1 )
by chaos78 on Wednesday, 2nd August 2006 @ 12:43:54 AM AEST
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beautiful poem

Re: You (put me together again) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 2nd August 2006 @ 01:40:00 AM AEST
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Sue, you have written another beautiful dedication and it is very inspiring to see this one and yet another wonderful poem from you. This is obviously about a great friend from another great friend. It reminds me of someone I know.

Keep your dreams eternal for someday they will come true.

Thank you for another beautiful flowing poem.

Tim

Re: You (put me together again) (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Wednesday, 2nd August 2006 @ 04:57:54 AM AEST
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So glad you have had such a good friend to help you Sue, its worked and your poem is a beautiful thank you. xxx

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