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Array ( [sid] => 123931 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => It Is Done [time] => 2006-07-31 22:27:52 [hometext] => One of the first whispers I heard, while in the hospital. It just needed some refinement. [bodytext] =>

It is done
They are gone
I must move on

I could cry
I could laugh
Truth is, I have

-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-

I could attempt to point a finger
Try my best to place the blame
Tell me then, what would it matter
This will still remain the same

I could easily speak in anger
Or fall deep into despair
I could wallow in self pity
Feed frustration to the air

While to some it seems expected
I expect it not of me
For it truly serves no purpose
It fulfills no useful need

-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-

I could brood
I could scream
What would it mean

It is done
They are gone
I must move on

[comments] => 6 [counter] => 310 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Nazmythian [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 44 [ratings] => 9 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

It Is Done

Contributed by Nazmythian on Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 10:27:52 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

It is done
They are gone
I must move on

I could cry
I could laugh
Truth is, I have

-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-

I could attempt to point a finger
Try my best to place the blame
Tell me then, what would it matter
This will still remain the same

I could easily speak in anger
Or fall deep into despair
I could wallow in self pity
Feed frustration to the air

While to some it seems expected
I expect it not of me
For it truly serves no purpose
It fulfills no useful need

-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-

I could brood
I could scream
What would it mean

It is done
They are gone
I must move on

Copyright © Nazmythian ... [ 2006-07-31 22:27:52]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: It Is Done (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 10:47:30 PM AEST
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I can't even begin to imagine what you must be going through. I do, however, know this, I have a great respect for you.

This poem though? Flawlessly superb!!!

As one of my best friends would say, make sure you take care of you.

Really, take care of yourself.

Tim

Re: It Is Done (User Rating: 1 )
by sohangme on Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 12:06:33 AM AEST
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very well done...good job

Re: It Is Done (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 04:28:31 AM AEST
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A really good poem of how you must feel, I dont know what happened but hope your ok now. xxx

Re: It Is Done (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 03:54:24 PM AEST
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A flawless poem of deep emotion and thought. I admire your strength, in times of pain and turmoil it is very easy to fall into a dark place. You havent done this. You have kept a sense of humor and a strong sense of being thoughout this time. I do understand these feeling more than you would realise.
Huge hugs

Michelle

PS taking baby steps leads to taking on the mountain and reaching the top my friend!

Re: It Is Done (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Wednesday, 2nd August 2006 @ 07:44:08 PM AEST
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A great take on your recent trauma and reconciling the loss, stretched into a poem for a wider bereavment.

Spike

Re: It Is Done (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 7th August 2006 @ 02:48:30 PM AEST
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Scott ..

*falls into a momentary silence*

I'm so sorry I missed this one .. I am awe-struck. Not just
by your talent but the audacity and fortitude you possess with
which to display your "gift". I cannot begin to understand the
dynamics of your last few weeks or the process by which
you are getting through them .. but I can tell you this .. I both
admire and respect you immensely.

Love and strength to you, hun.

~Breezy
(always here for you when needed ..)

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