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irrevocable pain

Contributed by sam16 on Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 04:37:30 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



everyone hurts for different reasons, mine is an untouchable pain, the kind of hurt thats irrivocable. the type you dont bring on yourself, the pain that never goes away,the pain that gets logded in your throat everytime you take a breath. the fact thats its painful now infuriates me, people always tell you its not your fault, you were only a child what could you have done, i was jus a child but even as a child you could have done something, if i had screamed, just once i wouldnt be so hurt, even a child had a voice but i didnt bother saving myself because you always expect someone else to.your knight in shinning armour, on a beautiful white horse, the brilliant knight that never comes, the fairytale that leaves you in an never ending nightmare and in the end your just a child, theres nothing you can do........look closely, im just another person who finds it hard 2 trust another, another kid in this game whos just as scared as you are, scared of getting hurt.......one last time.




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Re: irrevocable pain (User Rating: 1 )
by frmpoison2static on Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 10:17:42 PM AEST
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i can relate to this poem very much..

the feeling of always feeling down and out...

like no one will ever understand..

very good write..


Re: irrevocable pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 01:09:41 PM AEST
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Excellent poem!




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