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Array ( [sid] => 123885 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Conscious To Be Colonized [time] => 2006-07-31 01:14:14 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The relic wept,
Eclipsed by what it sought to be,
More shadows than the eye could see,
Immersed in their own logics,
Danced and worked and Danced,
Un aware of the goings-on
Around corners one could see
The confusion,
But only for an instant,
And then the logic disappeared,
Time dwarfed patience,
Crushing bones and dreams,
Revealing too many possibilities
And too few answers,
Importuned with possibility,
Glorified by consequence,
It expunged the plastic rhythms,
And let god pick up the rest
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Conscious To Be Colonized

Contributed by TheSchroedmeister on Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 01:14:14 AM in AEST
Topic: abstract

The relic wept,
Eclipsed by what it sought to be,
More shadows than the eye could see,
Immersed in their own logics,
Danced and worked and Danced,
Un aware of the goings-on
Around corners one could see
The confusion,
But only for an instant,
And then the logic disappeared,
Time dwarfed patience,
Crushing bones and dreams,
Revealing too many possibilities
And too few answers,
Importuned with possibility,
Glorified by consequence,
It expunged the plastic rhythms,
And let god pick up the rest

Copyright © TheSchroedmeister ... [ 2006-07-31 01:14:14]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Conscious To Be Colonized (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Wednesday, 29th November 2006 @ 02:03:17 AM AEST
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There are thousands of years of behavoir in your piece which becomes most captivating...My inner natives want to throws stones as you land on my shores but instead there is a thanks giving for sharing this bit of prose.

Good Work

Peace
Yang

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