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Baying at the Moon

Contributed by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 01:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: political



while little innocent ravens cry

and look above to burning skies

will their tears even be heard?

those scared and fearful little birds?



the hounds of war are baying at the moon

will venus goddess of love watch over us all soon?

will gods protect our human foolishness and dead?

or has theophagy come and showed its ugly head?



while little innocent ravens cry

and look above to burning skies

will their tears even be heard?

those scared and fearful little birds?



still but fledglings..

songs yet to be sung.








Copyright © ladyfawn ... [ 2003-02-11 01:20:00]
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Re: Baying at the Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 01:47:59 AM AEST
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This is like a flash of lightening..so much to think over..so many tears are there for the ears which can hear the pathetic cries when the nature is foreboding.... venkat


Re: Baying at the Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 02:15:41 AM AEST
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yet again, very good write...always good to hear your words.


Re: Baying at the Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by spooky on Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 06:46:29 AM AEST
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beautifully written,,,thankyou ladyfawn,,for another great one,,a friend in words,,spooky


Re: Baying at the Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 10:13:59 AM AEST
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Very true,well written message here! Great peice,Christina


Re: Baying at the Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 08:52:44 PM AEST
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Beautiful Nessa, (sprinkle ..... sprinkle ..... sprinkle) I guess it worked,


Re: Baying at the Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 12:02:47 PM AEST
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Ladyfawn,
You are way out of my league. Most of the time I just write funny little rhymes, you write poetry


Re: Baying at the Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 01:59:04 PM AEST
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beautiful and poignent... very intense...


Re: Baying at the Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by Tanna on Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 01:55:25 AM AEST
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Amazing write Nessa! Gives people much to think about.


Re: Baying at the Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 04:48:36 PM AEST
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loves ya babe and the poetry that y'are


Re: Baying at the Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by sunflower on Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 06:46:21 AM AEST
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thoughful and insightful, birds hearing the cries of war from the perch they sit atop


Re: Baying at the Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 11:52:20 PM AEST
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actually the birds in my poem represent children.... ty i'm glad for your view:) huggs nessa


Re: Baying at the Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by vegastar on Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 01:55:06 AM AEST
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ladyfawn,
I like your style, also I share your concern.


Re: Baying at the Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 02:56:58 PM AEST
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As the birds sadness cries through the winds of change, it makes us sit back and think.
Your words made me come up with this little caption,very inspiring,
Beautifully written.




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