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Array ( [sid] => 123832 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Love you never had for me [time] => 2006-07-29 11:15:39 [hometext] => I wrote this poem in the beginning of this year about a heartbreak and I hope u enjoy [bodytext] =>
Surrounded by so many lies,

And no where to hide,

As you begin to enter into,

My mind like a memory,

Awakened by all the hurt,

That keeps me crying,

Day in and day out,

Getting down on my knees,

Asking god to restore my soul,

Once again,

So that the pain you've already,

Caused me won't make me,

Burst into an open flame of hate,

So u can feel what I feel at this moment,

Tell me,

What did I do to deserve this,

Lasting heartache,

That travels within me,

Emotions,

Coming back and forth,

Making me realize,

That I've had enough,

Of this hell you put me through,

Now your own your own,

Cause I thought about,

The love u never had for me
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The Love you never had for me

Contributed by luckycharm on Saturday, 29th July 2006 @ 11:15:39 AM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

Surrounded by so many lies,

And no where to hide,

As you begin to enter into,

My mind like a memory,

Awakened by all the hurt,

That keeps me crying,

Day in and day out,

Getting down on my knees,

Asking god to restore my soul,

Once again,

So that the pain you've already,

Caused me won't make me,

Burst into an open flame of hate,

So u can feel what I feel at this moment,

Tell me,

What did I do to deserve this,

Lasting heartache,

That travels within me,

Emotions,

Coming back and forth,

Making me realize,

That I've had enough,

Of this hell you put me through,

Now your own your own,

Cause I thought about,

The love u never had for me

Copyright © luckycharm ... [ 2006-07-29 11:15:39]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Love you never had for me (User Rating: 1 )
by Lone_er on Saturday, 29th July 2006 @ 11:45:36 AM AEST
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I'm sorry for your pain but a powerful portrait of the same. Funny how pain can make us express exactly what we feel. .Keep up the good work..Russ

Re: The Love you never had for me (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 29th July 2006 @ 01:31:36 PM AEST
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Such a sad write though I feel a power within your soul that will carry you through. You presented this lie a true poet.

Michelle

Re: The Love you never had for me (User Rating: 1 )
by rockstarr12747 on Saturday, 29th July 2006 @ 08:00:43 PM AEST
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great write i used to feel the same about my step dad

~Crystal~

Re: The Love you never had for me (User Rating: 1 )
by midian on Monday, 7th August 2006 @ 03:43:13 AM AEST
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Wierd isnt it how the sudden sadness of a heartbreak can give birth to inspiration for such a wonderfull poem

Re: The Love you never had for me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 10th August 2006 @ 09:11:30 PM AEST
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very sad.....but great write.....is amazing how pain seems to be one of the easiest to express yet at same time....be hardest to endure.....keep up the great work....^_^"

Re: The Love you never had for me (User Rating: 1 )
by Balmain_Tiger on Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 07:50:01 AM AEST
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If these words represent a true relationship you once had then be glad it is over. thanks for sharing your heart

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