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[sid] => 123815
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[aid] => mick
[title] => A World Removed
[time] => 2006-07-28 21:24:40
[hometext] => A freeverse, though perhaps the most I've ever strayed from my prefered styles.
[bodytext] => "Mother! I had this terrible dream that the whole world turned into a metal jungle gym and spires of the metal poked holes in the clouds and there were all of these grey stone paths on the ground and everyone was in colorful metal boxes and they moved a circle with their hands and yelled at people to make the four circles under the box turn and move them all around the paths. And they weren't very good at moving the metal boxes and they plowed down animals and children every day and these terrifying people in black robes with wands with wooden hammers on the end - they must have been sorcerers, mother - and those sorcerers took away the metal boxes from the people who couldn't move them well. And the people were very sad that their metal box was taken so the sorcerer put them in a cave with carved walls so that it was a small square and the people would be sad and stay there for a very long time until their families came with thin shiny rectangles and somehow used the rectangles to get their family member out. And mother, there were metal birds flying in the sky and people would go into the bird and the bird would go all sorts of places with the people, but sometimes the bird would get tired and land, but the people inside would die because the bird I think forgot there were people in there. And a lot of people had metal things that were two rectangles put together and if the person pulled on a little lever the metal thing would spit out a smaller metal thing that went very fast and went into people and they died. And people did this to other people. They would get very angry and yell things at each other and then one person would use a metal thing to make the other person die. And that was the worst part I think. And mother, there was more, but I'm tired and I don't want to think about it anymore. It was the worst dream I ever had. Goodnight mommy." [comments] => 1 [counter] => 244 [topic] => 8 [informant] => Eve [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AmericanTragedy )
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