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Wet shirts cling to wet backs

The air is damp with moisture
The sun attempts in vain to streak through

Puddles to skip over in graceful strides
Conversation takes a turn
I come for the ride

Pleasant are the cool splashes
Relief from the heat rashes
Icicles dangle off hearts
Entwined in a love triangle
It starts

Twirling silver rod
Resistant fabric covers the beauty
Hair arranged in a comfortable stance
Legs hold firm
Knee buckling romance
A slow dance

Thoughts of leaving
For a good reason
Are not enough
Stay here
In sight
Within reach
Available with ease
Throwing caution to the breeze

Apathetic to surroundings
Just two talk amongst themselves
Truth would walk in circles
To prolong
This afternoon miracle

________
_____

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Girl with a Red Umbrella

Contributed by Mangos on Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 05:35:37 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

The rain drops fall intermittently
Wet shirts cling to wet backs

The air is damp with moisture
The sun attempts in vain to streak through

Puddles to skip over in graceful strides
Conversation takes a turn
I come for the ride

Pleasant are the cool splashes
Relief from the heat rashes
Icicles dangle off hearts
Entwined in a love triangle
It starts

Twirling silver rod
Resistant fabric covers the beauty
Hair arranged in a comfortable stance
Legs hold firm
Knee buckling romance
A slow dance

Thoughts of leaving
For a good reason
Are not enough
Stay here
In sight
Within reach
Available with ease
Throwing caution to the breeze

Apathetic to surroundings
Just two talk amongst themselves
Truth would walk in circles
To prolong
This afternoon miracle

________
_____

Copyright © Mangos ... [ 2006-07-28 17:35:37]
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Re: Girl with a Red Umbrella (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 06:38:24 PM AEST
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Mangos~
I loved ur write it had a mystical intriguing feel to it. I could just picture the whole thing inside my head. Captivating from start to finish. Well done and keep up the great work.
warm hugs,
sue m

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