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DADDY
Contributed by
renee
on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 10:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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DADDY WAS A RAMBLER
DADDY LIKED TO DRINK
BUT DADDY IS A SPECIAL MAN
HE IS TALL AND HE IS SWEET
DADDY WOULD LEAVE HOME
FOR WEEKS AT A TIME
BUT WHEN DADDY CAME HOME
EVERY THING WOULD BE FINE
DADDY RAN AROUND ALOT
DADDY WAS LOOKING FOR LOVE
SEE MY DADDY LOST HIS
MOMMY WHEN HE WAS VERY YOUNG
HE HAD A HARD TIME
BEING A FATHER UNTIL
HE SETTLED DOWN
AND NOW THAT HES
MUCH OLDER HE IS THE
BEST DADDY AROUND.
RENEE
Copyright ©
renee
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2003-02-10 22:20:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: DADDY
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 09:57:03 AM AEST (User
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good write you have talent keep them coming
Shari |
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Re: DADDY
(User Rating: 1 ) by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 10:18:47 AM AEST (User
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Miss Meeks,Alot of this sounds like my husband except for the running around,My husbands gone alot, his mom died when he was 8,but hes a great father to our kids! I liked this peice,Well done! Christina |
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Re: DADDY
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 05:40:50 PM AEST (User
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thank you for your comment and its mrs meeks glad you liked it thanks |
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