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How strangely he moves me as no other, with pain’s stance.
So I’ve moved on, taken it to the next lever; just not with him.
He still writes about me, as if my sweet spirit revisits him again.

Strange how love evades, and charades, and shuffles the game.
To him I’m a special mystery; while I frown on his methods vain.
Focused I moved on, leaving him; as they say- come what may.
At last I no longer cry at noon, or night, or the middle of the day.

Even though, Father has a new plans, for destiny's true liberty.
And now in my dreams there’s one who's intent on courting me.
Still, as if sweet music drifts by, I’m slowly drawn to the other.
I wish him whole; if only he’d come to God’s Table, like a brother.

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He Still Move Me

Contributed by Lilly-Quill on Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 12:11:46 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Enticingly slow, but every so gently, his words are a dance.
How strangely he moves me as no other, with pain’s stance.
So I’ve moved on, taken it to the next lever; just not with him.
He still writes about me, as if my sweet spirit revisits him again.

Strange how love evades, and charades, and shuffles the game.
To him I’m a special mystery; while I frown on his methods vain.
Focused I moved on, leaving him; as they say- come what may.
At last I no longer cry at noon, or night, or the middle of the day.

Even though, Father has a new plans, for destiny's true liberty.
And now in my dreams there’s one who's intent on courting me.
Still, as if sweet music drifts by, I’m slowly drawn to the other.
I wish him whole; if only he’d come to God’s Table, like a brother.

Copyright Â© Lilly-Quill ... [ 2006-07-28 00:11:46]
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Re: He Still Move Me (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 12:31:00 AM AEST
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Very good writing.
You go now!
huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: He Still Move Me (User Rating: 1 )
by eyes-of-love on Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 07:15:48 AM AEST
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amazing poem..

Re: He Still Move Me (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 10:22:01 AM AEST
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a wonderful write.
Regards,
FRANCO

Re: He Still Move Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Hiddendarkness1705 on Wednesday, 30th August 2006 @ 01:00:18 AM AEST
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you have such a way with words..

Re: He Still Move Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Loende on Wednesday, 22nd October 2008 @ 09:24:53 PM AEST
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Wow, I really liked this one! It's got some great lines, one of which is:

Strange how love evades, and charades, and shuffles the game.

Great job!

Be well,
Loende

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