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Array ( [sid] => 123712 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Diane of the Mourning Vale [time] => 2006-07-26 17:31:14 [hometext] => a lost love poem - inspired by Poe [bodytext] => Diane... Diane...
take me not to this mourning-
to the trees and the winds
of this mourning Diane

This vale... this vale...
show me not to this vale-
hold me not to this vow
that I gave you Diane

My hands... my hands...
with these mountains be damned-
for the loss of the love
and the smile of Diane

I beg... I beg...
of the ghostly who stand-
please haunt not and hold not
to my gravestone Diane [comments] => 3 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 22 [informant] => doug [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Diane of the Mourning Vale

Contributed by doug on Wednesday, 26th July 2006 @ 05:31:14 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Diane... Diane...
take me not to this mourning-
to the trees and the winds
of this mourning Diane

This vale... this vale...
show me not to this vale-
hold me not to this vow
that I gave you Diane

My hands... my hands...
with these mountains be damned-
for the loss of the love
and the smile of Diane

I beg... I beg...
of the ghostly who stand-
please haunt not and hold not
to my gravestone Diane

Copyright © doug ... [ 2006-07-26 17:31:14]
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Re: Diane of the Mourning Vale (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Wednesday, 26th July 2006 @ 05:34:50 PM AEST
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i really enjoyed this, the third stanza especially caught my eye. its unique, its great and kinda creepy. always great elements to have, dontcha think?lol
keep up the great work

Re: Diane of the Mourning Vale (User Rating: 1 )
by True on Wednesday, 26th July 2006 @ 06:08:26 PM AEST
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Seems our poetry is along the same lines today. Excellent poem, Poe was kind of a creepy writer but everyone loved him (after his death of course because no good artist is famous while alive, lol).

Re: Diane of the Mourning Vale (User Rating: 1 )
by richcol7522 on Wednesday, 26th July 2006 @ 10:29:12 PM AEST
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I'll have to read it again but I liked it alot. Very good job. Poe is one of my favorite too. Keep upi the good work.

Rich

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