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Array ( [sid] => 123709 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Rock Star [time] => 2006-07-26 17:15:26 [hometext] => Do you remember your first celebrity crush? This is sort of based on that... [bodytext] => Well she thinks that she’s in love with him,
But she doesn’t know a single thing,
She wants to spend her life at his side,
But she’s unprepared; not ready to ride,
The days fly by in a hurried blur,
And she’s lost her heart, but she don’t care,
For the boy with the brown eyes has stolen her soul,
And it doesn’t matter that his love is cold,
Oh, what she’d give for a single touch,
Maybe she wants this a little too much,
Scared him away with her talks about life,
And her ideal dream that she’ll be his wife,
She counted her eggs before they’d even hatched,
Erased an itch before a single scratch,
He’s far too young to give his heart in return,
And she doesn’t know she should just let it burn,
She looks up at him, stood on the stage floor,
Suddenly aware, that she’ll never be more,
Than a face in the crowd, without a name,
And her heart beats kinda different; it just ain’t the same,
Growing up isn’t easy to do;
Letting go of someone who’ll never love you,
She looks at his picture as she climbs into bed,
And a million ideas run through her head,
But she’s a woman now, with someone real at her side,
So the posters and pictures, she tries to hide,
Ten years pass; he often crosses her mind,
But she looks at him differently; she’s far more refined,
On her way to work, as she walks down the street,
She looks up, and whose eyes should she meet,
He grins down at her, a smile on his face,
It was all just a matter of time and of place,
It seems that our girl had her dreams come true,
If it happened to her, it could happen to you. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Ruby2sdy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Rock Star

Contributed by Ruby2sdy on Wednesday, 26th July 2006 @ 05:15:26 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Well she thinks that she’s in love with him,
But she doesn’t know a single thing,
She wants to spend her life at his side,
But she’s unprepared; not ready to ride,
The days fly by in a hurried blur,
And she’s lost her heart, but she don’t care,
For the boy with the brown eyes has stolen her soul,
And it doesn’t matter that his love is cold,
Oh, what she’d give for a single touch,
Maybe she wants this a little too much,
Scared him away with her talks about life,
And her ideal dream that she’ll be his wife,
She counted her eggs before they’d even hatched,
Erased an itch before a single scratch,
He’s far too young to give his heart in return,
And she doesn’t know she should just let it burn,
She looks up at him, stood on the stage floor,
Suddenly aware, that she’ll never be more,
Than a face in the crowd, without a name,
And her heart beats kinda different; it just ain’t the same,
Growing up isn’t easy to do;
Letting go of someone who’ll never love you,
She looks at his picture as she climbs into bed,
And a million ideas run through her head,
But she’s a woman now, with someone real at her side,
So the posters and pictures, she tries to hide,
Ten years pass; he often crosses her mind,
But she looks at him differently; she’s far more refined,
On her way to work, as she walks down the street,
She looks up, and whose eyes should she meet,
He grins down at her, a smile on his face,
It was all just a matter of time and of place,
It seems that our girl had her dreams come true,
If it happened to her, it could happen to you.

Copyright Â© Ruby2sdy ... [ 2006-07-26 17:15:26]
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Re: Rock Star (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Wednesday, 26th July 2006 @ 05:40:05 PM AEST
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very sweet, realistic and inspiring poem you wrote here. ah, those crushes....
haha.
you did a very good job represting(what i imagine was a teenage or pre teen kid) goes through and the change from that to a gown up is refreshing. good job

Re: Rock Star (User Rating: 1 )
by enamat on Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 04:23:01 AM AEST
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great poem! you described so well what we go through in that age. back then I've had a weakness for a rock star, too. today I see them with difrent eyes. funny thing, my post from few days ago is about a rock star, but from grown up perspective.

Re: Rock Star (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 07:47:18 PM AEST
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If dreams r meant 2 come true then love is inevitable. this is a delightful poem made 2 order 4 every dreamer. beautiful work u pen.

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Ben

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