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Array ( [sid] => 123708 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This Intoxicating Dance [time] => 2006-07-26 16:50:59 [hometext] => i think the title pretty much says it all... [bodytext] => The music and my heartbeat become one
As Bass becomes my pulse,
Rhythm becomes my soul.
Your hands slide down my body
And your lips rest on my neck,
Sweet and hot and greedy.
Two strangers intertwined in such intensity
That its force may be dangerous.
I can feel your smile, resting against my cheek,
So tenderly, I can't help but smile back.

Your hands on
my hips,
my waist,
my thighs.
Trying to feed a need without crossing the line
In this intoxicating dance.

I just want to pull you in,
As the music becomes a lover
And us the fools in love.
Wanting to submit to our desires
As the sound pulls our bodies closer,
Its hands sweeping us together until our skin is glued
By sweat and lust.
Temptation’s hot breath dancing all around us,
Teasing us mercilessly.

But you were just another guy,
Another dance,
another chance I wouldn’t dare take.

You were the one that could break my heart,
So I simply walked away.
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This Intoxicating Dance

Contributed by xxbreathlessx on Wednesday, 26th July 2006 @ 04:50:59 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

The music and my heartbeat become one
As Bass becomes my pulse,
Rhythm becomes my soul.
Your hands slide down my body
And your lips rest on my neck,
Sweet and hot and greedy.
Two strangers intertwined in such intensity
That its force may be dangerous.
I can feel your smile, resting against my cheek,
So tenderly, I can't help but smile back.

Your hands on
my hips,
my waist,
my thighs.
Trying to feed a need without crossing the line
In this intoxicating dance.

I just want to pull you in,
As the music becomes a lover
And us the fools in love.
Wanting to submit to our desires
As the sound pulls our bodies closer,
Its hands sweeping us together until our skin is glued
By sweat and lust.
Temptation’s hot breath dancing all around us,
Teasing us mercilessly.

But you were just another guy,
Another dance,
another chance I wouldn’t dare take.

You were the one that could break my heart,
So I simply walked away.

Copyright Â© xxbreathlessx ... [ 2006-07-26 16:50:59]
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Re: This Intoxicating Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by Keilantra on Wednesday, 26th July 2006 @ 07:10:59 PM AEST
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i liked this yes, but it was the end that brought down the house. fantastic

xXx

~kei

Re: This Intoxicating Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 26th July 2006 @ 09:36:24 PM AEST
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But you were just another guy,
Another dance,
another chance I wouldn’t dare take.
You were the one that could break my heart,
So I simply walked away.
Smart move, you go girl!
I really liked your poem you get the reader really caught up into reading ur poem from start to finish. Awesome write, keep up the great work.
warm hugs,
sue m

Re: This Intoxicating Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 01:20:07 PM AEST
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Oh, steamy! : )

I think when you find the right dance partner, you will not be able to walk away. There is, I believe, for each of us, a someone for whom there isn't a chance that we wouldn't be willing to take. And what a extraordinary thing it is when you're lucky enough to find that someone! And yeh... until you do, "just another guy" will never be enough. Wait those fireworks - they are possible!

This piece is intoxicating! Nicely done.

~Snemmy

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