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Please come to my secret garden, for a moment that we may share.
Oh lady fair I beg of thee, please come with haste to my arms.
I need to hold thee close to me, and feel thy magical charms.
To know thy touch, and warm embrace, thy sweet lips tracing mine.
Entangled there my very soul shall melt my dear in thine.
No words upon these lips of clay, your cherished love express.
With fingers laced and holding thee, thy silky skin caress.
But if while in my garden and time forever must die.
Two hearts entwined for eternity, shall take their wings and fly.
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Come To My Secret Garden

Contributed by Gentlemanpoet on Wednesday, 26th July 2006 @ 12:36:24 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Across the meadow and over the bridge, at the edge of the forest there.
Please come to my secret garden, for a moment that we may share.
Oh lady fair I beg of thee, please come with haste to my arms.
I need to hold thee close to me, and feel thy magical charms.
To know thy touch, and warm embrace, thy sweet lips tracing mine.
Entangled there my very soul shall melt my dear in thine.
No words upon these lips of clay, your cherished love express.
With fingers laced and holding thee, thy silky skin caress.
But if while in my garden and time forever must die.
Two hearts entwined for eternity, shall take their wings and fly.

Copyright © Gentlemanpoet ... [ 2006-07-26 12:36:24]
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Re: Come To My Secret Garden (User Rating: 1 )
by kttykttywfreckls on Wednesday, 26th July 2006 @ 12:43:24 PM AEST
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yours is such a romantic heart. I enjoy your work. and this is another great peice of work. keep it up.....

Re: Come To My Secret Garden (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Wednesday, 26th July 2006 @ 06:08:31 PM AEST
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Lovely. I like the expression and the tone of this piece very much. I adored the line beginning with "Entangled" for instance... but believe it is lacking some commas.

I'm making a mental note to visit more of your work. This definitely leaves me wanting to do so.

~Snemmy

Re: Come To My Secret Garden (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Wednesday, 26th July 2006 @ 09:47:31 PM AEST
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Sweet write. Full of love and freedom. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura

Re: Come To My Secret Garden (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 07:14:49 AM AEST
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An enticing and amazing piece of writing....
Jenni

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