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Array ( [sid] => 123659 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Beast of Maniacal Designs [time] => 2006-07-24 17:22:23 [hometext] => An experiment in something different [bodytext] => I watch you from my window
you're a thing of fear indeed
swirling , horrid ,ugly teeth
why have you come for me?

sometimes you lie there silent
'till the demon fills your rage
then you both go screamin'
screamin' ' round my mothers grave

you swallow up the ground
feasting on the life it seems
with maniacal designs
you devour everything

I hang upon the window
this can't be real I'm going mad
please don't eat me lawn mower beast
I'm just a little kitty cat

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The Beast of Maniacal Designs

Contributed by doug on Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 05:22:23 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

I watch you from my window
you're a thing of fear indeed
swirling , horrid ,ugly teeth
why have you come for me?

sometimes you lie there silent
'till the demon fills your rage
then you both go screamin'
screamin' ' round my mothers grave

you swallow up the ground
feasting on the life it seems
with maniacal designs
you devour everything

I hang upon the window
this can't be real I'm going mad
please don't eat me lawn mower beast
I'm just a little kitty cat

Copyright © doug ... [ 2006-07-24 17:22:23]
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Re: The Beast of Maniacal Designs (User Rating: 1 )
by True on Tuesday, 25th July 2006 @ 10:12:48 AM AEST
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Nice, you personified the lawn mower and took it from the view of the cat. My cats are like that with lawn mower's (and vacum's too for that matter). I think this worked out well, but the true test is did you enjoying writing about it?

Re: The Beast of Maniacal Designs (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 25th July 2006 @ 01:07:00 PM AEST
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Loved this one doug kitties are so funny about our mechanical beasts indeed. My Avalanche attacks the vacume cleaner though no fear at all we almost had a tail stuck in it one day lol. Nice personification!!

Michelle

Re: The Beast of Maniacal Designs (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Tuesday, 25th July 2006 @ 03:08:46 PM AEST
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lol..wasn't expecting that ending. Very nicely done, I enjoyed it. Made me smile.

Re: The Beast of Maniacal Designs (User Rating: 1 )
by Adam on Tuesday, 18th November 2008 @ 12:57:41 AM AEST
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What a twist. Loved it.

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