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Array ( [sid] => 123657 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Ode to an Unfulfilled Death [time] => 2006-07-24 17:10:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => And every so often in this aging circle of land
Falling teardrops shed upon a nightstand
To the sound of the drowning of loneliness,
And like the broken towers of light
That once ignited the night in flames
They lie all soulful and scattered amid
Outdated pulses and feelings stirred to fit the present,
Craving for a time that will never reign; nor did,
And I, this voice’s shadowy twin, like one of them
Always dwell on threadbare silhouettes of back then,
Like a lover of life unmatched and jettisoned
I lie conformed to mortality, the most cruel reality
Of yearnings to keep the heart from gladness
Piling the soul with recurring instances of sadness.

And from the engulfing silence a horrible truth emerges
Attacking me again and again, mercilessly to the end
And all I will have left by then is peaceful dreaming
and flashbacks of her in front of that vivid sky
And the fading tune of Lover, You Should’ve Come Over
Whose words will scatter inside me…- and then it goes
I’ll wait for you…and I’ll burn…will I ever see your sweet return?
…Sometimes a man must awake to find that, really, He has no-one…
And as the powerfull prose fill me in, her angelic face appear within
like a cascade of apathy, an epic picture soon to be escorted with
To the sullen site of man’s crossing,
Pale and dying and soon forgotten
I lie swathed and furled within vacant space
Slowly abating to nothingness.

Ah, touching my skin…pure and thin. Looking within…bare and
Vastly untouched. Now warmth pulling me up…eyes dreamily down,
Oh, the revelatory sight of a fading meteor cutting through the night
Painting dull minds with broad beauteous strokes of insight; with urge,
Oh, the persistence of men’s search for eternal bliss:
A holy grail exhumed from a bottomless pit
A cube of latitude sculptured from a tender kiss
The ultimate soothing hiss.
Mouth opening up…shivery breeze from above. Lips drop
To the enclosing of air…propelling a last brief yawp
To the frontier of the atmosphere,
And out there stillness abides the clicking of time
Cantering down the last narrowing lanes
The inevitably approach of rapid decline
…Rush, Agony, Silence…
Couldn‘t stay…Those who got away unfulfilled. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 64 [informant] => holstein [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ambiguous )
Ode to an Unfulfilled Death

Contributed by holstein on Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 05:10:00 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous



And every so often in this aging circle of land
Falling teardrops shed upon a nightstand
To the sound of the drowning of loneliness,
And like the broken towers of light
That once ignited the night in flames
They lie all soulful and scattered amid
Outdated pulses and feelings stirred to fit the present,
Craving for a time that will never reign; nor did,
And I, this voice’s shadowy twin, like one of them
Always dwell on threadbare silhouettes of back then,
Like a lover of life unmatched and jettisoned
I lie conformed to mortality, the most cruel reality
Of yearnings to keep the heart from gladness
Piling the soul with recurring instances of sadness.

And from the engulfing silence a horrible truth emerges
Attacking me again and again, mercilessly to the end
And all I will have left by then is peaceful dreaming
and flashbacks of her in front of that vivid sky
And the fading tune of Lover, You Should’ve Come Over
Whose words will scatter inside me…- and then it goes
I’ll wait for you…and I’ll burn…will I ever see your sweet return?
…Sometimes a man must awake to find that, really, He has no-one…
And as the powerfull prose fill me in, her angelic face appear within
like a cascade of apathy, an epic picture soon to be escorted with
To the sullen site of man’s crossing,
Pale and dying and soon forgotten
I lie swathed and furled within vacant space
Slowly abating to nothingness.

Ah, touching my skin…pure and thin. Looking within…bare and
Vastly untouched. Now warmth pulling me up…eyes dreamily down,
Oh, the revelatory sight of a fading meteor cutting through the night
Painting dull minds with broad beauteous strokes of insight; with urge,
Oh, the persistence of men’s search for eternal bliss:
A holy grail exhumed from a bottomless pit
A cube of latitude sculptured from a tender kiss
The ultimate soothing hiss.
Mouth opening up…shivery breeze from above. Lips drop
To the enclosing of air…propelling a last brief yawp
To the frontier of the atmosphere,
And out there stillness abides the clicking of time
Cantering down the last narrowing lanes
The inevitably approach of rapid decline
…Rush, Agony, Silence…
Couldn‘t stay…Those who got away unfulfilled.




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Re: Ode to an Unfulfilled Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Keilantra on Tuesday, 25th July 2006 @ 12:18:48 PM AEST
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this was vey dep and entriicing. i enjoyed it alot. good write.

xXx

~kei


Re: Ode to an Unfulfilled Death (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 25th July 2006 @ 01:21:26 PM AEST
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So much feeling and vivid displays in this write. I will be watching for more of your work.

Michelle




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