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then it was gone
wat if a person cam along
and then they went by
wat if ur moment or love came
would u seize it or let it slip
wat if hurt was in ur heart
would u let them fix it
or just keep it liek that
i let would let them
i would seize it
i wouldnt let the chance go away
i want u more than life
i would do anything for u
u will be mine forver and ever
we are attached in a special way
we can never be seperated
tho are bodies are far way
our hearts are connected
this is my mind
this is my heart
my eyes are open
i see the truth
nothing can take somthing a way unless u let it
listen to my words
be happy wit ur thoughts
enjoy it while u can
nobody lives forever
this is y u must tell me everything now
if it can wait then its not important
tell me all and i will listen
ur are the best
ur are special
u are my life
i luv u harely
nothing can change that
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if u

Contributed by taytay67 on Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 12:47:51 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



wat if a chance came
then it was gone
wat if a person cam along
and then they went by
wat if ur moment or love came
would u seize it or let it slip
wat if hurt was in ur heart
would u let them fix it
or just keep it liek that
i let would let them
i would seize it
i wouldnt let the chance go away
i want u more than life
i would do anything for u
u will be mine forver and ever
we are attached in a special way
we can never be seperated
tho are bodies are far way
our hearts are connected
this is my mind
this is my heart
my eyes are open
i see the truth
nothing can take somthing a way unless u let it
listen to my words
be happy wit ur thoughts
enjoy it while u can
nobody lives forever
this is y u must tell me everything now
if it can wait then its not important
tell me all and i will listen
ur are the best
ur are special
u are my life
i luv u harely
nothing can change that




Copyright © taytay67 ... [ 2006-07-24 00:47:51]
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Re: if u (User Rating: 1 )
by Lady_Daisy on Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 01:16:43 AM AEST
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I take it English is a second language to you. Or you're just lazy. To gain people's respect on this site try to use proper English not as if your texting someone. In my honest opinion (and I don't mean to be nasty) you don't have much talent, but keep writing. Oneday you might surprise yourself and others. Writing poetry takes years of practice, I don't mean that I'm any good I do it because it heals me.


Re: if u (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 10:36:25 PM AEST
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You have plenty emotion
and plenty of time to learn how to channel it
As for this piece, i read it at the right time.
the conversation i was having at the moment
Was it is not unwise to seize what you found.

It was to my sister

She read yours
so i printed it for.




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