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Array ( [sid] => 123602 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => If [time] => 2006-07-23 18:41:45 [hometext] => [bodytext] => If your heart had a voice
would it echo your mind?

If your mind had a choice
would it let you love blind?

If your eyes had no sight
would they let you see pain?

If it hurts when you fight
why do it again?

If you lost your mentality
would your brain taste defeat?

If your dreams were reality
would your life feel complete?

If you drowned in your sorrow
would your spirit live on?

If you died tomorrow
would the world know you're gone? [comments] => 5 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 43 [informant] => ho0da [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

If

Contributed by ho0da on Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 06:41:45 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

If your heart had a voice
would it echo your mind?

If your mind had a choice
would it let you love blind?

If your eyes had no sight
would they let you see pain?

If it hurts when you fight
why do it again?

If you lost your mentality
would your brain taste defeat?

If your dreams were reality
would your life feel complete?

If you drowned in your sorrow
would your spirit live on?

If you died tomorrow
would the world know you're gone?

Copyright © ho0da ... [ 2006-07-23 18:41:45]
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Re: If (User Rating: 1 )
by Hannah_Heaven on Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 06:45:21 PM AEST
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the most simplest complicated poem ive read .. simply set out .. but it makes you think ..
'If your dreams were reality
would your life feel complete?'
i love this line .. because thinking about it .. is that why we have dreams, to make life seem uncompleted because we try to complete it in our dreams .. its so wonderfully thought out that it makes it a much more hidden meaning .. great write han xx

Re: If (User Rating: 1 )
by deadclown on Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 06:55:45 PM AEST
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Very well written. Very impressive. I agree with Hannah, it is such a simple poem but the choice of words here does make u think. Clever piece

Re: If (User Rating: 1 )
by Adelle on Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 08:10:36 PM AEST
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I ABSOLUTLY LOVED IT!

Re: If (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 08:51:50 PM AEST
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wow, this poem defitnetly makes me think. you did a great job involving the reader in your poetry and you ask some very intriguing questions. who knows where the answer lies? great job!

Re: If (User Rating: 1 )
by kttykttywfreckls on Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 02:18:35 AM AEST
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Simple yet well written. Really makes you think.

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