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Array ( [sid] => 123575 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Asked So I Came [time] => 2006-07-23 07:14:37 [hometext] => I wrote this in connection with another poem of mine called NAIVE FASCINATION which was submitted at an earlier date [bodytext] => Death and destruction
My evil seduction
Fall down at my alter
Succumb to corruption

Disclose all your secrets
I'll tear them to pieces
Replace your desires
Your mine at your weakest

Believe in my cruelty
suggestion won't fool me
I know why you want this
There's sadness in beauty

Macabre seems romantic
You love all that's tragic
That's why you'll embrace me
Obsession runs frantic

And when your desire's through
Don't think that I'll stay true
When pain seems appealing
Then I will come find you

[comments] => 6 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 13 [informant] => deadclown [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

You Asked So I Came

Contributed by deadclown on Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 07:14:37 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Death and destruction
My evil seduction
Fall down at my alter
Succumb to corruption

Disclose all your secrets
I'll tear them to pieces
Replace your desires
Your mine at your weakest

Believe in my cruelty
suggestion won't fool me
I know why you want this
There's sadness in beauty

Macabre seems romantic
You love all that's tragic
That's why you'll embrace me
Obsession runs frantic

And when your desire's through
Don't think that I'll stay true
When pain seems appealing
Then I will come find you

Copyright Â© deadclown ... [ 2006-07-23 07:14:37]
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Re: You Asked So I Came (User Rating: 1 )
by jono on Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 07:33:19 AM AEST
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that might be suitable in phsycotic poems

Re: You Asked So I Came (User Rating: 1 )
by jono on Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 08:20:40 AM AEST
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I didn't mean to dis you

Re: You Asked So I Came (User Rating: 1 )
by jono on Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 10:19:48 AM AEST
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oh! ok nice poem!

Re: You Asked So I Came (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 03:13:29 PM AEST
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This one is a good write and there is great visualization in the words in this poem very dark but yet very satisfying to read. Thx for your comment on my piece….Steve

Re: You Asked So I Came (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 04:16:21 PM AEST
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Pretty good, it was a really dark read, enjoyable.

Re: You Asked So I Came (User Rating: 1 )
by Uncertain_Oblivion on Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 12:41:03 PM AEST
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This is so well done. It's beautiful actually.

"Macabre seems romantic
You love all that's tragic
That's why you'll embrace me
Obsession runs frantic"

That's my favorite part.

So come for your embrace...

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