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Anti-Perfect
Contributed by
BrokenXbyManyX
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Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 08:44:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm not to perfect you see.
I'm not even going to try to be.
People succeed and people fail.
It would be useless to wait and dwell.
Just listen, can't you see?
The perfect life is not for me?
If your willing to take a chance.
We can take an unperfect moonlight dance.
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Re: Anti-Perfect
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ruby2sdy on
Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 09:41:44 AM AEST (User
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Everything has it's flaws; and beauty is within those flaws; perfection would be far too dull to be beautiful... a very nice 'unperfect' poem!
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Re: Anti-Perfect
(User Rating: 1 ) by lnnie on
Friday, 10th October 2008 @ 01:10:06 PM AEST (User
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This is great--perfect line to end the poem
We can take an unperfect moonlight dance.
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