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Wedding Vow
Contributed by
Ruby2sdy
on
Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 04:00:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Eternity is a long, long time; can I spend it with you?
Let tomorrow bring a fragrant dawn, fresh, beautiful and new,
Beside you I stand, could never leave, because of all that binds me to you,
Each step of the way, I知 with you, I値l guide you; carry you if you need me to,
And I値l keep all our memories, locked in my heart, with letters I知 unable to send,
When you feel you cannot go on; my strength and my courage I値l lend,
If you ever need a helping hand, let me be your first port of call,
I promise that, if you ever crumble, I値l be there to soften the fall,
There値l be times whe you値l feel lonely, times when you値l feel sad,
But this is a vow that shall stand through that; a promise through good times and bad.
Copyright ツゥ
Ruby2sdy
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2006-07-21 04:00:30] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Wedding Vow
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 10:09:23 AM AEST (User
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Well, this is lovely. I think it's wonderful you're writing your own vows. A treasure for sure.
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Re: Wedding Vow
(User Rating: 1 ) by brew on
Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 10:47:46 AM AEST (User
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Seems ya have summed it up perfectly.! I wouldnt add nor change, a single word.! Lovely.
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Re: Wedding Vow
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 12:29:39 PM AEST (User
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simply beautiful it stirs many emotions in reading it .
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Re: Wedding Vow
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 11:35:38 PM AEST (User
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This is lovely spoken with true conviction. A
meaningfull quest well done.
Ben |
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