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Array ( [sid] => 12347 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => My Baby [time] => 2003-02-10 12:20:00 [hometext] => I wrote this poem for my girlfriend Deanne. It was written for her on our 1 month anniversary. [bodytext] => I lay here in bed counting sheep,
But I am restless, unable to sleep.
It's hard to sleep without, your touch,
Oh Baby, I love you oh so much.
I must have fallen into a trap,
B/c I never thought I'd meet someone like you, not on this map.
I love to cuddle with you baby,
That's not a yes, no, or even a maybe.
B/c Deanne, my love for you is true,
I will never abuse you or make you sad and blue.
I love Tau Kappa Epsilon fraternity,
But I love you beyond eternity.
You are my life and my soul,
I won't stop loving you, even if I had to pay a toll.
Somebody please pinch me now,
B/c after meeting you all I can say is wow.
I can't think straight when your not around,
You are the sweetest thing I ever did found.
I don't like it when you cry,
But you know I'll be there to dry your eye.
B/c babe you have nothing to fear,
For my feelings for you are everlasting, they will not tear.
You know how much I truly do care,
So please don't think that I am going anywhere.
I love you babe, always and forever,
That is not gonna change, not now, not ever.
All I can say is where have you been?
Your beauty tells me you came from heaven.
I think God for putting us together,
All I know someday you'll make a great mother.
With that only time will tell,
But I know that I'm yours, I'm not for sell.
Deanne, I couldn't be any happier,
Before I met you, my life seemed to only get crapier.
Today marks a special day in history,
Sweetie, I am proud to say its our 1 month anniversary!
This past month has been nothing but the best,
Now all I can say is, I look forward to the rest.
If I lost you now, I don't know what'd I do,
B/c Deanne Lynn Franks, I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 224 [topic] => 2 [informant] => budman [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
My Baby

Contributed by budman on Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 12:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I lay here in bed counting sheep,
But I am restless, unable to sleep.
It's hard to sleep without, your touch,
Oh Baby, I love you oh so much.
I must have fallen into a trap,
B/c I never thought I'd meet someone like you, not on this map.
I love to cuddle with you baby,
That's not a yes, no, or even a maybe.
B/c Deanne, my love for you is true,
I will never abuse you or make you sad and blue.
I love Tau Kappa Epsilon fraternity,
But I love you beyond eternity.
You are my life and my soul,
I won't stop loving you, even if I had to pay a toll.
Somebody please pinch me now,
B/c after meeting you all I can say is wow.
I can't think straight when your not around,
You are the sweetest thing I ever did found.
I don't like it when you cry,
But you know I'll be there to dry your eye.
B/c babe you have nothing to fear,
For my feelings for you are everlasting, they will not tear.
You know how much I truly do care,
So please don't think that I am going anywhere.
I love you babe, always and forever,
That is not gonna change, not now, not ever.
All I can say is where have you been?
Your beauty tells me you came from heaven.
I think God for putting us together,
All I know someday you'll make a great mother.
With that only time will tell,
But I know that I'm yours, I'm not for sell.
Deanne, I couldn't be any happier,
Before I met you, my life seemed to only get crapier.
Today marks a special day in history,
Sweetie, I am proud to say its our 1 month anniversary!
This past month has been nothing but the best,
Now all I can say is, I look forward to the rest.
If I lost you now, I don't know what'd I do,
B/c Deanne Lynn Franks, I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!




Copyright © budman ... [ 2003-02-10 12:20:00]
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Re: My Baby (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 03:21:25 PM AEST
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awww i bet she loved it, very beautiful.............


Re: My Baby (User Rating: 1 )
by angel71 on Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 06:57:21 PM AEST
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This is just too sweet, what a lucky girl :)


Re: My Baby (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 11:53:02 PM AEST
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great write, and welcome to ypdc!


Re: My Baby (User Rating: 1 )
by Depression-chan on Sunday, 9th January 2011 @ 11:23:13 AM AEST
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I have two things to say. Numero Uno: What an amazing and pretty poem. Deanne must be very happy. :) Number Two!: Is it just me or do no boys review on this poem? Correct me if I'm wrong. :D Anyways, Keep on writing!




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