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Array ( [sid] => 12345 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => wishin i could take it [time] => 2003-02-10 11:30:00 [hometext] => the meaning of life is what the person who is living it beleives matters most to them.....and when that meaning dies there is no life to live.......thats my opinion..... [bodytext] => I wish i could take this pain i feel inside the pain that u made me see the person u showed me the one that ive always been the loser i am the pathetic creature that i really truely am...u showed me that i dont belong on this earth and that i dont matter to anyone .....showed me that im worthless the one that could make a difference the one i needed left me when i needed him most and now im nothing with out you
Do you really believe when i say im fine with out you do i matter to you does your heart really hate the way i need to hear those three words????

i need your love but i have nothing i gave up everything to be with you and i got nothing so what am i to do now that im nothing???
what do i do with out you?? what do i do when the day comes to make my life start over???
what is life with out love???
what do i do with out the love of my life???
nothing because there is nothing i can do with out you........ [comments] => 6 [counter] => 204 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Tier [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

wishin i could take it

Contributed by Tier on Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 11:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I wish i could take this pain i feel inside the pain that u made me see the person u showed me the one that ive always been the loser i am the pathetic creature that i really truely am...u showed me that i dont belong on this earth and that i dont matter to anyone .....showed me that im worthless the one that could make a difference the one i needed left me when i needed him most and now im nothing with out you
Do you really believe when i say im fine with out you do i matter to you does your heart really hate the way i need to hear those three words????

i need your love but i have nothing i gave up everything to be with you and i got nothing so what am i to do now that im nothing???
what do i do with out you?? what do i do when the day comes to make my life start over???
what is life with out love???
what do i do with out the love of my life???
nothing because there is nothing i can do with out you........

Copyright © Tier ... [ 2003-02-10 11:30:00]
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Re: wishin i could take it (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 01:06:34 PM AEST
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This is tough but you'll get through this,Good heartfelt poetry, Things look bad now but soon there will be another! Christina

Re: wishin i could take it (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 03:11:56 PM AEST
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awwww! *huggs* ........keep in mind though..that love is a fabric that never fades..........

Re: wishin i could take it (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 04:59:55 PM AEST
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It can make life lose meaning if you let someone gain too much control...please don't give up. This is a great write, by the way.

Re: wishin i could take it (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 12:54:18 AM AEST
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Tier i loved this I have shown love and have had it shoved back in my face. Time heals all wounds Tier trust me. The poem was a great expression of your pain. keep on writing.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: wishin i could take it (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 06:25:32 PM AEST
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Great write, Tier...but in my humble opinion, YOU have to be the one to make YOUR life worthwhile.... don't depend on anyone to do it for you.... Nice chatting with you last night..
Jenni

Re: wishin i could take it (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 04:47:29 PM AEST
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Tier
Excellent poem. I wanted to write something of this quality when I wrotre my poem "I dont want to see you anymore" but in the end couldn't find the words.
I got near to it writing about the events instead.

Did the same sort of thing in "Heaven is where you find it"

Going back to read some more of yours.

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