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Array ( [sid] => 12340 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Pain [time] => 2003-02-10 09:00:00 [hometext] => random thoughts [bodytext] => The pain you give me
The pain I feel
The pain that shelters you
The pain that I run from.

Pain, that's all it is
Killing everything within me

Nothing left to live for
Your pain has killed it all
A wicked laugh you cry as you destroy my world

Pain, that's all it is
Killing everything within me

The pain you give me
The pain I feel
That pain that makes you strong
That pain which makes me cry

Pain, that's all it is
Killing everything within me

A world left in devastation
Death walks amongst us all
Your words are weapons
You have shot us all

Pain, that's all it is
Killing everything within me

The words you speak
The words I hear
The words you believe in
The words that make me crumble down

I've had enough of the pain
Now its time for you to SHUT-UP! [comments] => 2 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 13 [informant] => bopeep [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Pain

Contributed by bopeep on Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The pain you give me
The pain I feel
The pain that shelters you
The pain that I run from.

Pain, that's all it is
Killing everything within me

Nothing left to live for
Your pain has killed it all
A wicked laugh you cry as you destroy my world

Pain, that's all it is
Killing everything within me

The pain you give me
The pain I feel
That pain that makes you strong
That pain which makes me cry

Pain, that's all it is
Killing everything within me

A world left in devastation
Death walks amongst us all
Your words are weapons
You have shot us all

Pain, that's all it is
Killing everything within me

The words you speak
The words I hear
The words you believe in
The words that make me crumble down

I've had enough of the pain
Now its time for you to SHUT-UP!

Copyright © bopeep ... [ 2003-02-10 09:00:00]
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Re: Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by nightrider on Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 11:17:33 AM AEST
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wow... so true, isnt it? this makes so much sense.... great write....

Re: Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 03:24:29 PM AEST
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A lot of feeling and anger in this. I liked it a lot especially the repetition. Great poem.

Bobo (Joel)

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