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Array ( [sid] => 123399 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My comfort, My escape [time] => 2006-07-18 23:07:13 [hometext] => I have had drinking problem and this is how I felt. Kind of confusing because it's like I'm talking to people then the acohol. [bodytext] => Scream, no one hears.
Cry, no one cares.
bleed no one sees.
I'm here you know,
I'm alive I exsist.
Of course you that
but you just don't care
you realize I'm there.
Your the one that hits me
You show your love to me
Love that I miss.
You hear me and tell me to shut up
You see blood but say I'm not hurt.
You comfort me when I'm down
but when I'm up and strong
Your not even around
I breath no knows
I hurt no one wonders why
I'm sick but they don't care
My comfort is the acohol
It's my friend that's always there
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 246 [topic] => 65 [informant] => jtkzlimz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

My comfort, My escape

Contributed by jtkzlimz on Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 11:07:13 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

Scream, no one hears.
Cry, no one cares.
bleed no one sees.
I'm here you know,
I'm alive I exsist.
Of course you that
but you just don't care
you realize I'm there.
Your the one that hits me
You show your love to me
Love that I miss.
You hear me and tell me to shut up
You see blood but say I'm not hurt.
You comfort me when I'm down
but when I'm up and strong
Your not even around
I breath no knows
I hurt no one wonders why
I'm sick but they don't care
My comfort is the acohol
It's my friend that's always there

Copyright © jtkzlimz ... [ 2006-07-18 23:07:13]
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Re: My comfort, My escape (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 11:15:53 PM AEST
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Man... I'm feelin' you-
you need to get some help for that..
and until then, feel free to PM me anytime.. I've had the same problem - have had it for years now-
and not only that.. but MANY more.. (the consequent mental problems that come with addiction)
I feel ya.. I'm here for you..
Happiness can be had my friend... trust me on this-

just a PM away anytime~

Billy... Man On High

Re: My comfort, My escape (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimmie_mac on Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 11:27:44 PM AEST
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I'm sure you have friends but the alcohol makes you blind to that because it wants to be your only friend. And in the end it will let you down hard. I hope that you can get over your "friendship" and find another way to cope which will not be easy. But you need to make poetry your friend as a was to release your feelings and thoughts that you are afraid to tell others. I have been around drinking all my life. My stepfather sister and brother and sees what it does. I know you are stronger than it. I wish you well and don't mean to lecture. I mean well I hope I didn't offend you. I just want to see you better. Your ypdc friend. Kim

Re: My comfort, My escape (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 01:17:30 AM AEST
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Sad but well written.
sounds like you're getting some friends and great advice here.
Keep writing.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy

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