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Gratitude of Payne
Contributed by
blueheart
on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 08:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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Thank you,
For the times you could look at them,
And defend me.
You sheilded,
A fragile heart,
From the pain they offered.
You never joined them,
In their quest for my misery,
Though you were their blood.
You respected me,
And I am lost for your purpose,
But I owe you,
For staying by me.
Thanks el.
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blueheart
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2003-02-10 08:30:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Gratitude of Payne
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ronald on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 09:40:13 AM AEST (User
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About this poem, simply wonderful... simply FABULOUS! Good poem! keep on writing pal! |
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Re: Gratitude of Payne
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 11:54:25 AM AEST (User
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great write @-<<- |
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Re: Gratitude of Payne
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomsLDY on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 09:33:58 PM AEST (User
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Grea write no one can ask more of a tried and trusted friend than to stand by you in times of trouble regardess the personal cost to themselves. |
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Re: Gratitude of Payne
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 10:48:08 AM AEST (User
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A true friend is like a flame in the night...even in the darkest moments it can be counted on to show the way. A very touching write my friend. :o) Larry |
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Re: Gratitude of Payne
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jarmen_Kell on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 09:10:36 AM AEST (User
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Hey. This is the first time I've read something you've written and all I can say is-great write. |
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Re: Gratitude of Payne
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cynthia on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 09:45:36 PM AEST (User
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Now that is what a call a loyal friend. Well written tribute. *S* Cynthia |
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