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Array ( [sid] => 123386 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => just a friend [time] => 2006-07-18 19:46:59 [hometext] => [bodytext] => When we first met
I had no clue,
That soon I'd be
in love with you.
At first you were
Just someone new.
Someone to talk to
when there was nothing else to do.
Now if more than a day goes by,
where I don't at least say hi,
my hearts torn out,
and I just want to cry.
But though I feel this way,
I can't bring myself to say,
what I really want to say.
Maybe someday the words'll get out.
But for now I guess
I'm just your friend.
Someone to talk to,
when you have nothing else to do. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 300 [topic] => 33 [informant] => bluewolf [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )

just a friend

Contributed by bluewolf on Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 07:46:59 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

When we first met
I had no clue,
That soon I'd be
in love with you.
At first you were
Just someone new.
Someone to talk to
when there was nothing else to do.
Now if more than a day goes by,
where I don't at least say hi,
my hearts torn out,
and I just want to cry.
But though I feel this way,
I can't bring myself to say,
what I really want to say.
Maybe someday the words'll get out.
But for now I guess
I'm just your friend.
Someone to talk to,
when you have nothing else to do.

Copyright © bluewolf ... [ 2006-07-18 19:46:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: just a friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimmie_mac on Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 09:58:00 PM AEST
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I hope you get the courage because you never know what you have until it is gone.

Re: just a friend (User Rating: 1 )
by freespirit on Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 12:42:06 AM AEST
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HI Welcome to the world of poets
remember
Words never spoken can never be heard

write from your heart
(Freespirt )

Re: just a friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 06:59:02 AM AEST
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Pretty good. Reads well except for some repetitiveness in the initial rhyming scheme (clue/you/new/to/do). Vary it a little and it will flow better. That aside, you hit on a very real sentiment and common enough experience here.
Not a bad second post.

Spike

Re: just a friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 12:28:36 PM AEST
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Wonderful read and I agree "words never spoke, are never heard".......Mike

Re: just a friend (User Rating: 1 )
by luckycharm on Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 12:46:40 PM AEST
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I can really relate 2 this because its hard to like someone and u feel as though they don't want u around or they don't notice u when they do. Keep your head up and just don't give up because soon someone will come and pick up all the pieces of your broken heart. God bless!.-luckycharm

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