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pressed down with more pressure
I'm only so strong
its amazing to see
all those people out there
holding it up
I feel so weak
not being able
to hold it
the pressure
pushes me down
grinding me into the ground
I just want to let it all fall
let it all go
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I CANT STAND ALL THIS PRESSURE

Contributed by The_Unknown on Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 03:13:53 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Every day I'm
pressed down with more pressure
I'm only so strong
its amazing to see
all those people out there
holding it up
I feel so weak
not being able
to hold it
the pressure
pushes me down
grinding me into the ground
I just want to let it all fall
let it all go
and break down and cry

Copyright © The_Unknown ... [ 2006-07-18 03:13:53]
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Re: I CANT STAND ALL THIS PRESSURE (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 03:34:36 AM AEST
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A very nice piece, well written and expressed perfectly, I know exactly where you're coming from... can really relate, thanks for sharing,

Ruby2sdyx

Re: I CANT STAND ALL THIS PRESSURE (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 03:52:22 AM AEST
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I can understand just how you feel.. Its a good poem and I think it helps to know your not alone in feeling that way. xxx

Re: I CANT STAND ALL THIS PRESSURE (User Rating: 1 )
by deadclown on Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 07:33:00 AM AEST
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Feel this way a lot myself but you have to keep in mind that both you and I and probably a lot of other people who feel this way, have got as much right as anyone else to do and say what we need to do to feel better. As long as noone gets hurt, do things the way you want to do them. Live things your way so you can end each day feeling good

Re: I CANT STAND ALL THIS PRESSURE (User Rating: 1 )
by Catalina on Tuesday, 23rd September 2008 @ 05:08:33 AM AEST
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I cen relate to this one. Thanks for Sharing It.

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