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[aid] => mick
[title] => HAPPY B-DAY RAIN CHECK
[time] => 2006-07-17 21:49:17
[hometext] => This Bud's 4 u Happy, happy 64
[bodytext] =>
...One...
...Together...
SultryRose's Signatures
Twenty one years ago in a tent
There at Buffaloe River Park
When you backed down on my intent.
Happy b-day my darlin
So you are gonna be 64?
This is my b-day rain check to you,
Uh huh, we've been there before
Yeah, your happy b-day raincheck.
You saw the wild one in me.
What cha get for sneeking me
your wine.
Ahh yes the tiger unleashed
We'll jus finish it some time.
Time only lets wisdom glow
Wasn't a fading fantasy for me.
Yeah time does things, it's true
But darlin we'll finish this thing, see?
One b-day rain check cashable any time.
4 eva luv,
emy
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HAPPY B-DAY RAIN CHECK
Contributed by
emystar
on
Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 09:49:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
BirthdayPoems
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...One...
...Together...
SultryRose's Signatures
Twenty one years ago in a tent
There at Buffaloe River Park
When you backed down on my intent.
Happy b-day my darlin
So you are gonna be 64?
This is my b-day rain check to you,
Uh huh, we've been there before
Yeah, your happy b-day raincheck.
You saw the wild one in me.
What cha get for sneeking me
your wine.
Ahh yes the tiger unleashed
We'll jus finish it some time.
Time only lets wisdom glow
Wasn't a fading fantasy for me.
Yeah time does things, it's true
But darlin we'll finish this thing, see?
One b-day rain check cashable any time.
4 eva luv,
emy
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emystar
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Re: HAPPY B-DAY RAIN CHECK
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by The_Unknown on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 02:43:58 AM AEST
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It's a nice write. Keep it up emy! :)
luvs ya!
Jess |
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Re: HAPPY B-DAY RAIN CHECK
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 07:26:17 AM AEST
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Your poetry is so musical and u r so u, lovely as always and most appropriate as a song writter, realy get off on reading your unique in every one you write.
((((((emystar)))))))
Ben |
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Re: HAPPY B-DAY RAIN CHECK
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 08:59:05 AM AEST
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Lovely as always, Emm....beautiful pic too...
Hugs and luv
Jenni |
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Re: HAPPY B-DAY RAIN CHECK
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 11:57:48 AM AEST
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I agree with Jennie k
lovely very lovely write
hugs |
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Re: HAPPY B-DAY RAIN CHECK
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 01:02:57 PM AEST
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Watch out dear Emy dear..........those rainchecks can get you!
What a clever way of saying Happy B-day!
To whomever I wish them a happy 64 day too!
Warm love
momconsue |
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Re: HAPPY B-DAY RAIN CHECK
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by Lone_er on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 08:53:36 PM AEST
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| Wild one huh? (smiles ) Beautiful writing as always emmy and a wonderful birthday gift for someone special..Russ |
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Re: HAPPY B-DAY RAIN CHECK
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 09:32:57 PM AEST
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there's always time Emy..
and what a beautiful birthday wish this is~
Peace and love to the "wild one" ..lol
(you go.. Emy)
: )
Billy |
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Re: HAPPY B-DAY RAIN CHECK
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by RLWildPassions on
Saturday, 22nd July 2006 @ 03:59:42 PM AEST
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| smoochies emy my friend.. very heartfelt write.. you are wild beautiful in words.. explain to self and a reader such to me... and.. brilliant feelings to go.. reminisce.. back when... lovely.. so much joy in another day.. even if far forward... you are such a loveheart people.. RL |
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Re: HAPPY B-DAY RAIN CHECK
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd July 2006 @ 06:23:46 PM AEST
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Wild one, eh? Well, you little vixen you! lol
Beautiful sentiments and wishes here, emy.
Full of love and warmth.
~Breezy |
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Re: HAPPY B-DAY RAIN CHECK
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 26th July 2006 @ 10:06:02 PM AEST
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Emy~
my sweet friend, I should say "wild one", lol, you go girl~ What an awesome thing to do, a happy birthday raincheck. You clever Miss you. Wishing your Bud a happy 64th birthday.
An awesome write filled with such heartfelt and loving emotions.
love, hugs n prayers to ya sweet lady,
sue m |
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Re: HAPPY B-DAY RAIN CHECK
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by Wilder on
Friday, 8th June 2007 @ 06:09:17 PM AEST
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| Oh that's a really cute poem, made me smile - good write :o) |
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