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Array ( [sid] => 123336 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This Should Never Have Been Written [time] => 2006-07-17 18:14:27 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Everybody has plans
Dreams they wish, but are aware, they may never fulfill

The trick is to be happy in the moments of ordinary
So that simple dreams are readily available

Reaching for the sky brings stars crashing down
Disturbing the progression of the earth around the vast sun

Sometimes are segments of a larger scheme with a purpose
To shadow the enchainment with a disguise crafted to intrigue

Be gentle with fragile pieces which hold value of sentimental-
Quality is found in the craftsmanship within the inventors skilled hands

Huddled in bunkers where trenches are dwarfed to apartment complexes
Are hordes of citizens driving in droves towards the outskirts of their lives

A mass exodus of feeble-mindedness now penetrates new borders
Reverberated by an echoed swirl of something grand floating in the air

A free-sample of lead by example is given to all who walk through the door
An express checkout with bags of rags to help clean the blood from its core


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This Should Never Have Been Written

Contributed by Lancaster on Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 06:14:27 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Everybody has plans
Dreams they wish, but are aware, they may never fulfill

The trick is to be happy in the moments of ordinary
So that simple dreams are readily available

Reaching for the sky brings stars crashing down
Disturbing the progression of the earth around the vast sun

Sometimes are segments of a larger scheme with a purpose
To shadow the enchainment with a disguise crafted to intrigue

Be gentle with fragile pieces which hold value of sentimental-
Quality is found in the craftsmanship within the inventors skilled hands

Huddled in bunkers where trenches are dwarfed to apartment complexes
Are hordes of citizens driving in droves towards the outskirts of their lives

A mass exodus of feeble-mindedness now penetrates new borders
Reverberated by an echoed swirl of something grand floating in the air

A free-sample of lead by example is given to all who walk through the door
An express checkout with bags of rags to help clean the blood from its core


________________________
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Copyright © Lancaster ... [ 2006-07-17 18:14:27]
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Re: This Should Never Have Been Written (User Rating: 1 )
by Keilantra on Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 07:37:02 PM AEST
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Reaching for the sky brings stars crashing down
Disturbing the progression of the earth around the vast sun

That was the best line, very original.

xXx

~kei


Re: This Should Never Have Been Written (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 10:48:59 AM AEST
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But aren't shooting stars so beautiful? We all need to reach for them sometimes, otherwise we become another statistic, just a name on a list, this poem was very well written, made me think, thanks,

2sdyx




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