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Array ( [sid] => 123334 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => cant think of a title that suits [time] => 2006-07-17 17:44:38 [hometext] => rather odd this one seems unfinished has no direction tell me what you think [bodytext] => darkness calls out to me
telling me to follow
so cold here
im all alone
listening to the darkness
i died some time ago
left the world behind
to hold you one more time
and tell you that i love you
is all thats left for me now
i listen to the darkness
telling me to follow
deeper inside me
so cold here
im all alone
i have no one
but the darkness still calls [comments] => 3 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 75 [informant] => judasman [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

cant think of a title that suits

Contributed by judasman on Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 05:44:38 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

darkness calls out to me
telling me to follow
so cold here
im all alone
listening to the darkness
i died some time ago
left the world behind
to hold you one more time
and tell you that i love you
is all thats left for me now
i listen to the darkness
telling me to follow
deeper inside me
so cold here
im all alone
i have no one
but the darkness still calls

Copyright © judasman ... [ 2006-07-17 17:44:38]
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Re: cant think of a title that suits (User Rating: 1 )
by deadclown on Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 06:35:03 PM AEST
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From the 6th line to the 10th reads a bit confusing. I know what ur tying to say but the wording seems too rushed together. Other than that I think it's a good piece and I like the fact that we don't know exactly what the darkness wants.

Re: cant think of a title that suits (User Rating: 1 )
by randumbchit on Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 08:25:02 PM AEST
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i enjoyed that fact that people can put what meaning they want into your poem. Great use of imagry.

Re: cant think of a title that suits (User Rating: 1 )
by randumbchit on Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 08:25:06 PM AEST
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i enjoyed that fact that people can put what meaning they want into your poem. Great use of imagry.

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