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Array ( [sid] => 123321 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blind Love ( Someone to want me) [time] => 2006-07-17 14:22:24 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I have no need for sadness,
I don't want to suffer pain,
Just want a normal childhood,
Not be abandoned once again,

Don't want no fancy toys,
Or clothes that look so new,
Just want a mum and dad,
maybe sisters and brothers too.

Want to belong within a family,
To be part of a happy home,
Not stuck inside this childrens home,
Feeling sad and all alone,

Don't want to be a sad statistic,
Or you to feel sorry for me,
For I am sure if you would accept me,
Happy together we all would be,

For I am hoping that one day someone,
Will adopt me and treat me kind,
But the honest truth is will they,
When they see I am blind,

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Blind Love ( Someone to want me)

Contributed by jerseysue on Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 02:22:24 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I have no need for sadness,
I don't want to suffer pain,
Just want a normal childhood,
Not be abandoned once again,

Don't want no fancy toys,
Or clothes that look so new,
Just want a mum and dad,
maybe sisters and brothers too.

Want to belong within a family,
To be part of a happy home,
Not stuck inside this childrens home,
Feeling sad and all alone,

Don't want to be a sad statistic,
Or you to feel sorry for me,
For I am sure if you would accept me,
Happy together we all would be,

For I am hoping that one day someone,
Will adopt me and treat me kind,
But the honest truth is will they,
When they see I am blind,

Copyright © jerseysue ... [ 2006-07-17 14:22:24]
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Re: Blind Love ( Someone to want me) (User Rating: 1 )
by RoxyGirl on Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 03:23:42 PM AEST
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i know how you feel i may not have been put up for adoption but i am beat every day and was abanden by my mom who never cared I just have to tell you be strong dont let no one put you down because you are beautiful and keep your head up high some one will love you. keep on writing because you write good and by this poem i was able to feel your pain
love always your friend
ROXYGIRL

Re: Blind Love ( Someone to want me) (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 09:09:59 PM AEST
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What a sad write... my mum was adopted, after her mother died, and she used to sing me a song called 'Nobody loves me, I'm nobody's child' this poem reminded me of it, how heartbreaking, in terms of technicalities, it's got a lovely rhythm and flow to it,

Tuesdayx

Re: Blind Love ( Someone to want me) (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 04:17:28 AM AEST
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So sad but its brilliant the way you have been able to go into the mind of a child who needs love and a family but because the child is blind feels no one will want to love them..I know this is sad but true though, I read a story about a woman who fosters and has adopted only disabled children so there are people who would love a child with disabilities..xx

Re: Blind Love ( Someone to want me) (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 04:28:46 AM AEST
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One more thing to say, if people want to adopt because they cant have children they should not just want a baby or a child with no problems, when we have our children there is no guarantee they will be born fit and well, we could not just give them away because they are not perfect.. You would still love them, I dont think people who want to adopt should be allowed to if thats how they feel..Your poem really got me thinking. xxx

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