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Array ( [sid] => 123308 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unintentional Wounds [time] => 2006-07-17 07:30:43 [hometext] => Haven't written for ages, this isn't quite finished... still, comments are welcome. [bodytext] => Have you ever loved someone so much that it hurts, cause' you realise that the best thing for them is for you to let them go?
Stared straight into a mirror and watched the pieces fall away, cause' all of which that defines you suddenly becomes unknown?
Felt like time has frozen still, cause' you know that your love for this person will always remain the same?
But you know you have to try and move on, cause' you don't want to open up the unintentional wounds once again

At about this time the lies and manipulation began, and so the conflict and friction was formed
And even though you and I were always truthful, never choosing to tell a lie, we ended up to be the ones that were torn
Our bond was broken... time after time, but somehow we held on to pull through with flying colours
But I guess in the end it was inevitable that you would eventually sir come to the pressures of others

I'm sorry for all the pain and suffering that I have caused you and I wish there was someway that I could take it back
I just wish I never felt like I always had something to prove, maybe in the end all you were trying to show me was exactly that?
I should have listened to the advice given to me by others, when everyone started to interact
Then just maybe, with everything that we've been through... our relationship would still remain intact?

Have you ever loved someone so much that it hurts, cause' you realise that the best thing for them is for you to let them go?
Stared straight into a mirror and watched the pieces fall away, cause' all of which that defines you suddenly becomes unknown?
Felt like time has frozen still, cause' you know that your love for this person will always remain the same?
But you know you have to try and move on, cause' you don't want to open up the unintentional wounds once again

You were scared to tell me things about yourself, but really you had no reason to be afraid
And I know that I sometimes was over protective, making you feel like you were enslaved
But I never meant to make you feel insignificant, or that you always needed to be saved
it's just that I'd never forgive myself if something ever happened to you, leading me to dig my own grave

All I ever did was care about you and tried to help you through tough times
But I'm starting to see what pushed you away and I never wish that I crossed the line
I just hope that you can find it in yourself to forgive me someday, with whatever amount of dignity remains
While I ponder and contemplate what's next for me, as I bow my head in shame

Have you ever loved someone so much that it hurts, cause' you realise that the best thing for them is for you to let them go?
Stared straight into a mirror and watched the pieces fall away, cause' all of which that defines you suddenly becomes unknown?
Felt like time has frozen still, cause' you know that your love for this person will always remain the same?
But you know you have to try and move on, cause' you don't want to open up the unintentional wounds once again

My feelings for you have always been strong, and will continue to do so for a long time to come
Even if everyone else thinks they're wrong, I'm afraid to say that there is nothing else that can be done

This burden that you carry, growing stronger and manifesting itself over time, I would not wish upon anyone
And I hope that you can one day lift it from your shoulders, awaking to the morning rise of the bright and gleaming sun
To live a happy and prosperous life, watching the waves crash down as you stare out beyond the sea
And despite what you may be thinking at this time, I know that you will always be a part of me

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Unintentional Wounds

Contributed by Tobe on Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 07:30:43 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



Have you ever loved someone so much that it hurts, cause' you realise that the best thing for them is for you to let them go?
Stared straight into a mirror and watched the pieces fall away, cause' all of which that defines you suddenly becomes unknown?
Felt like time has frozen still, cause' you know that your love for this person will always remain the same?
But you know you have to try and move on, cause' you don't want to open up the unintentional wounds once again

At about this time the lies and manipulation began, and so the conflict and friction was formed
And even though you and I were always truthful, never choosing to tell a lie, we ended up to be the ones that were torn
Our bond was broken... time after time, but somehow we held on to pull through with flying colours
But I guess in the end it was inevitable that you would eventually sir come to the pressures of others

I'm sorry for all the pain and suffering that I have caused you and I wish there was someway that I could take it back
I just wish I never felt like I always had something to prove, maybe in the end all you were trying to show me was exactly that?
I should have listened to the advice given to me by others, when everyone started to interact
Then just maybe, with everything that we've been through... our relationship would still remain intact?

Have you ever loved someone so much that it hurts, cause' you realise that the best thing for them is for you to let them go?
Stared straight into a mirror and watched the pieces fall away, cause' all of which that defines you suddenly becomes unknown?
Felt like time has frozen still, cause' you know that your love for this person will always remain the same?
But you know you have to try and move on, cause' you don't want to open up the unintentional wounds once again

You were scared to tell me things about yourself, but really you had no reason to be afraid
And I know that I sometimes was over protective, making you feel like you were enslaved
But I never meant to make you feel insignificant, or that you always needed to be saved
it's just that I'd never forgive myself if something ever happened to you, leading me to dig my own grave

All I ever did was care about you and tried to help you through tough times
But I'm starting to see what pushed you away and I never wish that I crossed the line
I just hope that you can find it in yourself to forgive me someday, with whatever amount of dignity remains
While I ponder and contemplate what's next for me, as I bow my head in shame

Have you ever loved someone so much that it hurts, cause' you realise that the best thing for them is for you to let them go?
Stared straight into a mirror and watched the pieces fall away, cause' all of which that defines you suddenly becomes unknown?
Felt like time has frozen still, cause' you know that your love for this person will always remain the same?
But you know you have to try and move on, cause' you don't want to open up the unintentional wounds once again

My feelings for you have always been strong, and will continue to do so for a long time to come
Even if everyone else thinks they're wrong, I'm afraid to say that there is nothing else that can be done

This burden that you carry, growing stronger and manifesting itself over time, I would not wish upon anyone
And I hope that you can one day lift it from your shoulders, awaking to the morning rise of the bright and gleaming sun
To live a happy and prosperous life, watching the waves crash down as you stare out beyond the sea
And despite what you may be thinking at this time, I know that you will always be a part of me





Copyright © Tobe ... [ 2006-07-17 07:30:43]
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Re: Unintentional Wounds (User Rating: 1 )
by yackerz85 on Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 09:27:04 AM AEST
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If this is your uncompleted work, your completed work will be simply amazing. I like it a lot. Your words make me feel what you feel.




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