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Take me as I am (in total), surrendering all and you’ll see
Since a multitude of tears, no looking back, I on for liberty
Few will pay such a price to rule with Christ in Victory

Yes I still weep heart-tears, from time to time, unfortunately
Past your decision, depths of God’s own tears do enrapture me
Winter’s past (nothing last) but I shall recover from your love
Enraptured in the tears of God, revelations from His Holy Dove

Look in my heart then; your suicide and mine is regrettable true
If it is the last thing I do, by God divine, I will get over you
Try and find again one who’d risk it-all, to be by your side
Where's the courage, with that misused gift, to excel or confide [comments] => 4 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Lilly-Quill [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

My Last Tears

Contributed by Lilly-Quill on Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 03:27:03 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Look into my heart and then you’ll know what you mean to me
Take me as I am (in total), surrendering all and you’ll see
Since a multitude of tears, no looking back, I on for liberty
Few will pay such a price to rule with Christ in Victory

Yes I still weep heart-tears, from time to time, unfortunately
Past your decision, depths of God’s own tears do enrapture me
Winter’s past (nothing last) but I shall recover from your love
Enraptured in the tears of God, revelations from His Holy Dove

Look in my heart then; your suicide and mine is regrettable true
If it is the last thing I do, by God divine, I will get over you
Try and find again one who’d risk it-all, to be by your side
Where's the courage, with that misused gift, to excel or confide

Copyright Â© Lilly-Quill ... [ 2006-07-17 03:27:03]
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Re: My Last Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 04:11:45 AM AEST
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A bit sad but awesome writing.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy

Re: My Last Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 06:41:43 AM AEST
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lovely write, you use such intricate language, and your style is very much your own! very nice rhythm and flow to the piece, too, good one!

2sdyx

Re: My Last Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Balmain_Tiger on Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 07:08:43 AM AEST
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Your feelings really show through. The style seems true. Enjoyable read.

Re: My Last Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 02:17:29 PM AEST
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This is so emotional. Wish I could put that feeling in words as you have. Sue x

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