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Array ( [sid] => 123290 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Escape [time] => 2006-07-16 23:37:41 [hometext] => any and all comments would be nice [bodytext] => at night when I dream
I escape and run to you
we hold hand and run
through the park
where we once played
we fall among the grass
laughing, talking
just happy to be near
we smile and hold eachother close
knowing it shouldnt ever end
but then come the dark clouds and rain
and the alarm clock sounds
and I know I cant make it stop
cause now youre fading away
and I scream out and grab for you
but now I'm fading away too
the I wake up hoping youre laying next to me
but youre not, and it hurts and I miss you even more [comments] => 4 [counter] => 215 [topic] => 22 [informant] => lovestruck [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

The Escape

Contributed by lovestruck on Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 11:37:41 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

at night when I dream
I escape and run to you
we hold hand and run
through the park
where we once played
we fall among the grass
laughing, talking
just happy to be near
we smile and hold eachother close
knowing it shouldnt ever end
but then come the dark clouds and rain
and the alarm clock sounds
and I know I cant make it stop
cause now youre fading away
and I scream out and grab for you
but now I'm fading away too
the I wake up hoping youre laying next to me
but youre not, and it hurts and I miss you even more

Copyright © lovestruck ... [ 2006-07-16 23:37:41]
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Re: The Escape (User Rating: 1 )
by PoeticHybrid on Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 11:41:07 PM AEST
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Good write. It really shows your hurt well.

Re: The Escape (User Rating: 1 )
by sohangme on Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 12:37:10 AM AEST
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the waking up is the hardest huh? good job

Re: The Escape (User Rating: 1 )
by Davinah on Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 04:01:54 AM AEST
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Waking up to reality can be painful at times...

Very well done!

~D~

Re: The Escape (User Rating: 1 )
by Angel16 on Wednesday, 2nd August 2006 @ 12:32:34 PM AEST
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*Very good write; lovestruck. I definitely could
relate to ur poem.

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