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Array ( [sid] => 123252 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wings to Fly [time] => 2006-07-16 02:43:37 [hometext] => Rumblings of a ole women.... [bodytext] => Alas My Sweet
I am Lost
with the emotion of golden Love
Frighten it leaves me
Crumbled and broken
like a China doll

Each time you call

And We make intents
AND THEY Usually FAIL
FATE is ii it be meant
ONLY FOr THE YOUNG

I try to put him out of my mind

How can I make you see
That It just can"t be
Forgive me for Loving
you so passionately
So terribly
deep
and secertly
And so like it sems
Meant to be

Those eyes bewitching me
Making all that matters
and others
go away

Those simile words make
all
my make up dreams
seem so real
How much longer can I hang on
To this Lost Star

How long will it take to take
me too
chose
between
a Rock and a Sparrow

Whisper
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Wings to Fly

Contributed by Whisper on Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 02:43:37 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Alas My Sweet
I am Lost
with the emotion of golden Love
Frighten it leaves me
Crumbled and broken
like a China doll

Each time you call

And We make intents
AND THEY Usually FAIL
FATE is ii it be meant
ONLY FOr THE YOUNG

I try to put him out of my mind

How can I make you see
That It just can"t be
Forgive me for Loving
you so passionately
So terribly
deep
and secertly
And so like it sems
Meant to be

Those eyes bewitching me
Making all that matters
and others
go away

Those simile words make
all
my make up dreams
seem so real
How much longer can I hang on
To this Lost Star

How long will it take to take
me too
chose
between
a Rock and a Sparrow

Whisper

Copyright © Whisper ... [ 2006-07-16 02:43:37]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Wings to Fly (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Thursday, 21st December 2006 @ 07:03:35 PM AEST
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Well Done...Fly Fly Fly...

Efforts like this help us all drop the rocks.

Thank You
Yangdantien

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