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Array ( [sid] => 123194 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Me and him [time] => 2006-07-15 02:50:24 [hometext] => This Poem is about the dellima faced by teanagers in adolescence and the grief on loosing someone u loved alot [bodytext] => Me and Him
First we were friends
Together we used to set up trends

Then he changed
His friendship evolved to something unnamed

He said it was love
By swearing on a flight of Dove
His infatuation made him do it
Still he felt unsure a bit
Love! Hormones! Lust!
Him I still couldn’t trust
Around me, he felt pretty uncomfortable
It was like in an audience, he was atop a table

Finally for both of our sake I had to end it
He tried a lot to mend it
By writing Woeful Ballads and Poetry
Which at that time didn’t affect me

He stopped trying finally
At that point Realization struck me “I cared for him deeply”

He moved ahead in life, as life goes on
Leaving me behind in his book of life like a page unknown

In his Heart my place was occupied by my friend
Now I became his X girlfriend


She was with him till she received gifts
After that their relationship started to drift
Finally she broke up
Leaving him again with a shattered Heart


I wanted to soothe his soul
But he ignored me piercing my heart and making a hole

He showed himself strong yet again
But I knew and felt his pain

I knew His heart bled from the cut
Hard outside, soft inside just like a coconut

I still feel guilty when I stare into his eyes
My heart feels his anger! And cries

I wish I could go back in time
And again he could be mine

I would again be in his arms
And together we would dance

But as time could not be reversed
Together we both would have to face this curse

If one wish of mine could be fulfilled
I would ask for our relationship to be rebuilt

Now there is no point crying over spilt milk
He would always remain a king to me dressed in silk






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Me and him

Contributed by kira on Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 02:50:24 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Me and Him
First we were friends
Together we used to set up trends

Then he changed
His friendship evolved to something unnamed

He said it was love
By swearing on a flight of Dove
His infatuation made him do it
Still he felt unsure a bit
Love! Hormones! Lust!
Him I still couldn’t trust
Around me, he felt pretty uncomfortable
It was like in an audience, he was atop a table

Finally for both of our sake I had to end it
He tried a lot to mend it
By writing Woeful Ballads and Poetry
Which at that time didn’t affect me

He stopped trying finally
At that point Realization struck me “I cared for him deeply”

He moved ahead in life, as life goes on
Leaving me behind in his book of life like a page unknown

In his Heart my place was occupied by my friend
Now I became his X girlfriend


She was with him till she received gifts
After that their relationship started to drift
Finally she broke up
Leaving him again with a shattered Heart


I wanted to soothe his soul
But he ignored me piercing my heart and making a hole

He showed himself strong yet again
But I knew and felt his pain

I knew His heart bled from the cut
Hard outside, soft inside just like a coconut

I still feel guilty when I stare into his eyes
My heart feels his anger! And cries

I wish I could go back in time
And again he could be mine

I would again be in his arms
And together we would dance

But as time could not be reversed
Together we both would have to face this curse

If one wish of mine could be fulfilled
I would ask for our relationship to be rebuilt

Now there is no point crying over spilt milk
He would always remain a king to me dressed in silk










Copyright © kira ... [ 2006-07-15 02:50:24]
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Re: Me and him (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 03:04:54 AM AEST
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U did a great job with this.
wow very good writing.
huggs,
emy


Re: Me and him (User Rating: 1 )
by TheSpiritx on Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 03:36:42 AM AEST
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You've got some creative rhymes and concepts presented pretty well here.

This is a great first submission and I hope to see more from you soon.

Welcome to YPDC.com, kira, hlad to have you!

TSx




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