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Denial
Contributed by
poetichybrid
on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 02:33:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Pathetically inclined
to use alcohol to unwind
but I have no other choice
I have no real voice
I appear stable and strong
but it's an act all along
I am nothing but a sad mess of feelings
who can't cope with life's dealings
I try to be me,
and let no one see
that I am nothing more
than life's emotional whore
I let it win time after time
then try to show it using rhyme
When people tell me I am good
I know I would stop if I could
because I am not glad
for my life to sound so sad
and I know you don't smile
as I put myself in denial.
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poetichybrid
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Re: Denial
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by emystar on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 03:13:53 AM AEST
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Very unique write.
Great writing.
huggs,
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Re: Denial
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by one-curly-fry on
Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 03:37:07 AM AEST
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This is a good piece as well. I've tended to the drink for the same reasons - but I hope you're not like that anymore... Life is for the living mate - if ppl let you down, it's their failing - not yours.
Most just seem unable to think to any real depth and the person who can generally feels very isolated - that's at least how I've seen my situation.
Another good one!
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