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Array ( [sid] => 123168 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Word Play [time] => 2006-07-14 14:15:02 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I never lied, even as I was pushing you away
I was always straight up and in your face
But you’ll take my “No” s how they please you
Play with my words to make something new.

I was always honest, even when I was hurt
When I was hurting you;
But you’re taking the hurt in a different way
You’re not letting me leave or walk away.

This relationship is so much like a stormy night,
Forcing everyone inside,
Except we’re the storm and the rain and the clouds
And we’re making mayhem everywhere we try to hide.

There’s too much static going on between us
Our particles aren’t supposed to touch, there are words you shouldn't say;
But you’re touching anyway, whispering against my conscience
And it’s making me react in the strangest way.

What you want is like a giant hand at my throat
Choking me while I scream for my mercy
But you’re not letting go until you get what you want
I’m begging but you can’t hear me.

I never lied, not to you at all
Even when I was hurt, when I was hurting you
But you’ll take my No” s how they please you
Play with my words to create something new.
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Word Play

Contributed by keilantra on Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 02:15:02 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



I never lied, even as I was pushing you away
I was always straight up and in your face
But you’ll take my “No” s how they please you
Play with my words to make something new.

I was always honest, even when I was hurt
When I was hurting you;
But you’re taking the hurt in a different way
You’re not letting me leave or walk away.

This relationship is so much like a stormy night,
Forcing everyone inside,
Except we’re the storm and the rain and the clouds
And we’re making mayhem everywhere we try to hide.

There’s too much static going on between us
Our particles aren’t supposed to touch, there are words you shouldn't say;
But you’re touching anyway, whispering against my conscience
And it’s making me react in the strangest way.

What you want is like a giant hand at my throat
Choking me while I scream for my mercy
But you’re not letting go until you get what you want
I’m begging but you can’t hear me.

I never lied, not to you at all
Even when I was hurt, when I was hurting you
But you’ll take my No” s how they please you
Play with my words to create something new.




Copyright © keilantra ... [ 2006-07-14 14:15:02]
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Re: Word Play (User Rating: 1 )
by slayer_015 on Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 11:24:22 PM AEST
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Emotion,emotion,emotion!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Amazing.



Brian


Re: Word Play (User Rating: 1 )
by redsleeve on Tuesday, 9th September 2008 @ 07:13:04 AM AEST
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agreed, full of emotion.
great write.




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