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Nature
Contributed by
Gentlemanpoet
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Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 01:50:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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At the edge of the forest lays a meadow of green.
A doe and her fawn at the brook there are seen.
Eating the grass touched with the dew.
Through the branches and leaves the morning shines through.
The whippoorwill calls, as the silence is broken.
Feathered friends make their music, but no words are spoken.
The chattering squirrel with his tail all a flutter.
And the babbling brook with it’s splash and sputter.
The blades of grass sway in a breeze.
Acorns drop from the large oak trees.
Off in the distance the call of a crow.
Echoing back as he flies to and fro.
In the heat of the day the deer seeks the shade.
The birds that are chirping in the nests that they’ve made.
A duck and her ducklings waddle to the brook.
All lined in a row, like soldiers they look.
As the day ends and the suns out of sight.
All nature prepares for a cool summer night.
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Gentlemanpoet
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Re: Nature
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sagefairy on
Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 01:55:53 PM AEST (User
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Very pretty. There are places like that not very far from me. I like the descriptiveness here.. Very good work.
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Re: Nature
(User Rating: 1 ) by jerseysue on
Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 01:57:04 PM AEST (User
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Another vision in rhyme. A pure masterpiece. Wis I could write that way. Mine come out so monochrome, yours shine out in a myriad of colour and feeling.Sue x |
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Re: Nature
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 02:12:53 PM AEST (User
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Very nice write about my favorite subject. Ya did good in placing many beautiful and touching pictures in this reader's mind. Excellent work.
wabl
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Re: Nature
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 05:14:00 PM AEST (User
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Thank you for sharing such a nice peaceful and gentle day in the life of nature. Very vivid with the imagery. I like it.
Tim
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Re: Nature
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 11:02:38 PM AEST (User
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Beautiful write. Sounds like a lovely day. Nature has a way of healing the soul. Thanks for sharing this very nice nature write.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Nature
(User Rating: 1 ) by redsleeve on
Tuesday, 9th September 2008 @ 07:11:42 AM AEST (User
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great post.
beautiful picture. |
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