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Array ( [sid] => 123144 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Believe Me [time] => 2006-07-13 22:03:46 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Plain, ordinary.
Is the life that I live
-and, same old routine
there's no new beginnings.

Where?
How can I figure out where I'm standing
Why am I burning
-deep inside?

Listen to me now,
Can you,
tell me
what I've got to do to feel free?

And know that there is more to see,
-and, more to me,
Believe me.

So tell me
what's there to see,
what's out there for me?

Got to show the real me
If I have a heart, it's alright, I know,
I've got to find myself now.
I'm giving it my all.

If I could only have a wish
that would change the way
that
I
am
I'll see new horizons
Will there be something beautiful in the distance?

Look up in the sky
and the sun is shining bright upon me
-now,
couldn't be as bad as it may seem.
I just wanna know if you can take me as I am.

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Believe Me

Contributed by RAGEyourDREAM on Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 10:03:46 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Plain, ordinary.
Is the life that I live
-and, same old routine
there's no new beginnings.

Where?
How can I figure out where I'm standing
Why am I burning
-deep inside?

Listen to me now,
Can you,
tell me
what I've got to do to feel free?

And know that there is more to see,
-and, more to me,
Believe me.

So tell me
what's there to see,
what's out there for me?

Got to show the real me
If I have a heart, it's alright, I know,
I've got to find myself now.
I'm giving it my all.

If I could only have a wish
that would change the way
that
I
am
I'll see new horizons
Will there be something beautiful in the distance?

Look up in the sky
and the sun is shining bright upon me
-now,
couldn't be as bad as it may seem.
I just wanna know if you can take me as I am.

Copyright © RAGEyourDREAM ... [ 2006-07-13 22:03:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Believe Me (User Rating: 1 )
by PoeticHybrid on Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 10:15:46 PM AEST
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Nicely writtien.

Re: Believe Me (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 10:48:22 PM AEST
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I've felt some of the same things so I enjoyed your writing very much. I won't throw my nickel and dime philosophy on you to try to help but I will wish you the best of luck. take care , doug

Re: Believe Me (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 11:55:05 AM AEST
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A sweet genuine poem. Flowed very nicely, and really reflected on your thoughts. Great piece. Kimberly

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