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Array ( [sid] => 123134 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mini Skirts ,The Typical Nature [time] => 2006-07-13 18:12:46 [hometext] => Being 16 years old, there are many distractions as we get older, girls, partying, and everything else. Sometimes we are to worried and rushed over these things. Just slow down, relax, and enjoy what you have. [bodytext] => Sitting on my porch
gazing through the mosquito misted air
Sticky sweet heat latched onto me
yet,smiling with out a care

Summer orange sun staying up for everyone late
As i watch the youngs playing baseball,
the brave ones step up to the plate
The ball goes flying up, up, and away
Into the neighbours yard
With
"THE BIG SCARY DOG!"

Officially ending their day

The adults of tommoro set out for the Saturday night
I am out too,relaxing only with
The dimming light
My tight stringed stresses slowly
lower
notes
The summer my song,
Tense the past, Lavender the present
and now pure bliss,

Gulping a sparkling coke, as it crackles off the ice
The liquid tickles my tounge, feeling extremely nice

Themomentwasshort,
My cell phone rang,I'm heading out for the night
Convinced by another, i guess i'll leave

My dimming light

Nature the pause button
To this youthful R rated movie
To fast and coltish
To realize a true beauty
Only the small mini-skirts with tanned long legs, are for the eyes on a Saturday night
No baseball games,
No sparkling coke,
No Orange sun,

When will the sharp eyes focus,
No need for glasses, yet so blind
The setting of a summer night, sometimes better then a really hot girl
who am i kidding, nothing is better then a really hot girl
I am the youth, yet pausing for a moment,
Latching onto the elder,then slipping off quickly
Back to my movie

In acting a part
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Mini Skirts ,The Typical Nature

Contributed by football13 on Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 06:12:46 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Sitting on my porch
gazing through the mosquito misted air
Sticky sweet heat latched onto me
yet,smiling with out a care

Summer orange sun staying up for everyone late
As i watch the youngs playing baseball,
the brave ones step up to the plate
The ball goes flying up, up, and away
Into the neighbours yard
With
"THE BIG SCARY DOG!"

Officially ending their day

The adults of tommoro set out for the Saturday night
I am out too,relaxing only with
The dimming light
My tight stringed stresses slowly
lower
notes
The summer my song,
Tense the past, Lavender the present
and now pure bliss,

Gulping a sparkling coke, as it crackles off the ice
The liquid tickles my tounge, feeling extremely nice

Themomentwasshort,
My cell phone rang,I'm heading out for the night
Convinced by another, i guess i'll leave

My dimming light

Nature the pause button
To this youthful R rated movie
To fast and coltish
To realize a true beauty
Only the small mini-skirts with tanned long legs, are for the eyes on a Saturday night
No baseball games,
No sparkling coke,
No Orange sun,

When will the sharp eyes focus,
No need for glasses, yet so blind
The setting of a summer night, sometimes better then a really hot girl
who am i kidding, nothing is better then a really hot girl
I am the youth, yet pausing for a moment,
Latching onto the elder,then slipping off quickly
Back to my movie

In acting a part




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Re: Mini Skirts ,The Typical Nature (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 10:37:01 PM AEST
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I liked this. It made me smile and I was quite interested throughout. Take care , doug


Re: Mini Skirts ,The Typical Nature (User Rating: 1 )
by sohangme on Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 04:59:42 PM AEST
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Nice..I enjoyed it...I liked how it ended


Re: Mini Skirts ,The Typical Nature (User Rating: 1 )
by dougnut on Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 04:50:17 AM AEST
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Good read

I hope you continue writing like this,

looking forward to more.

God bless,

M . Doug :-)


Re: Mini Skirts ,The Typical Nature (User Rating: 1 )
by Catalina on Tuesday, 23rd September 2008 @ 10:32:08 AM AEST
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nicely done! beautiful write, I enjoyed it!




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