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Array ( [sid] => 123064 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Still Want To Be With You [time] => 2006-07-12 11:58:05 [hometext] => poem for bf reely sad but meh [bodytext] => Stop it, just leave her there...
Broken on the floor,
Way too many pieces,
To fit together anymore,
Stop trying to fix her,
The wounds are cut too deep,
The shards of glass are sharp,
Her scars that she must keep,
To remind her of the past,
To remind her of whats real,
Hurt so many times before,
So numb she barely feels,
You spark that certain something,
That shes never felt inside,
And shes so very greatful,
That she breaks down and cries,
How could this be happening,
It’s too good to be true,
Although this angels wings are broken,
I still want to be with you. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 32 [informant] => xxnights_childxx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Still Want To Be With You

Contributed by xxnights_childxx on Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 11:58:05 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Stop it, just leave her there...
Broken on the floor,
Way too many pieces,
To fit together anymore,
Stop trying to fix her,
The wounds are cut too deep,
The shards of glass are sharp,
Her scars that she must keep,
To remind her of the past,
To remind her of whats real,
Hurt so many times before,
So numb she barely feels,
You spark that certain something,
That shes never felt inside,
And shes so very greatful,
That she breaks down and cries,
How could this be happening,
It’s too good to be true,
Although this angels wings are broken,
I still want to be with you.

Copyright Â© xxnights_childxx ... [ 2006-07-12 11:58:05]
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Re: Still Want To Be With You (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 12:04:38 PM AEST
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You must really love this man to have gone through that much pain, at least you can express it in this very indepth poem. Very well written emotion. Take care, Kimberly

Re: Still Want To Be With You (User Rating: 1 )
by midnight_writer on Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 08:28:20 PM AEST
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i love this...especially the last 2 lines..beautiful

i can feel the pain...so emotional. so powerful

i like how you went to talking about yourself in 3rd person...and then in the last line, in 1st person

x-Midnight~Amaya-x

Re: Still Want To Be With You (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Monday, 2nd July 2007 @ 07:13:37 AM AEST
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Painful flow...
well done

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