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Array ( [sid] => 123019 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => FLAW [time] => 2006-07-11 00:38:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You were the flaw in my fiendish master plan.
But I sold you down the river nevertheless.
You are out of your depth now.
Trying to fight fire with fire.

I suppose this unexpected turn of events
won’t send you into raptures.
There is no room for rapprochement
once the bubble bursts.

And I won’t budge on this deal.
You signed the dotted line.
And still you refuse to concede defeat
longing for one last moment of glory.

And you may cut a striking figure.
As you still think the world is at your feet.
But don’t you believe it.
This is the beginning of the end…

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FLAW

Contributed by Davinah on Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 12:38:05 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

You were the flaw in my fiendish master plan.
But I sold you down the river nevertheless.
You are out of your depth now.
Trying to fight fire with fire.

I suppose this unexpected turn of events
won’t send you into raptures.
There is no room for rapprochement
once the bubble bursts.

And I won’t budge on this deal.
You signed the dotted line.
And still you refuse to concede defeat
longing for one last moment of glory.

And you may cut a striking figure.
As you still think the world is at your feet.
But don’t you believe it.
This is the beginning of the end…

Copyright Â© Davinah ... [ 2006-07-11 00:38:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: FLAW (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 10:07:36 AM AEST
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Sometimes victory can be sweet, can't it? Especially when you've been on the losing end for so damn long...Reading this; I get the sense you're discussing something of a highly personal nature, as I can feel the strong emotions in your words. I enjoyed this piece because of that...Keep it up!

~Scorp.

Re: FLAW (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 01:58:46 AM AEST
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Davinah~
Well said my dear friend. You go girl~ I absolutely love how u bring ur point across to ur reader. Victory is so sweet, especially when the stakes are so high.
Well done and keep up the excellent work~
warm hugs,
suzie Q

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