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Array ( [sid] => 122989 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Shuffle and a Hidden Glance [time] => 2006-07-10 12:11:56 [hometext] => A bit Emo, and more of a song than a poem, but this is how I was feeling at the time [bodytext] => You said, through tears of tepid desperation,
That all the fears I felt were in my head.
I cried, pure tears of final perspiration,
You left me slowing drowning in our bed.
I saw, a shuffle and a hidden glance,
The stance that you intended me to see.
I felt, a rope aphixiating me,
You never, ever really let me breathe.

Stone cold, you're staring out the window pane,
A car park's such a thrilling place to be.
Drink up, you're soaking up the sorrow,
Tomorrow's just a joke you'll never see.
Nightfall, through primary coloured disco beams,
Repeating sorry actions from before.
Grey dawn, Wipes away forgotten dreams.
My heart is cured but yours will break some more. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 48 [informant] => alasdaircairns [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

A Shuffle and a Hidden Glance

Contributed by alasdaircairns on Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 12:11:56 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

You said, through tears of tepid desperation,
That all the fears I felt were in my head.
I cried, pure tears of final perspiration,
You left me slowing drowning in our bed.
I saw, a shuffle and a hidden glance,
The stance that you intended me to see.
I felt, a rope aphixiating me,
You never, ever really let me breathe.

Stone cold, you're staring out the window pane,
A car park's such a thrilling place to be.
Drink up, you're soaking up the sorrow,
Tomorrow's just a joke you'll never see.
Nightfall, through primary coloured disco beams,
Repeating sorry actions from before.
Grey dawn, Wipes away forgotten dreams.
My heart is cured but yours will break some more.

Copyright © alasdaircairns ... [ 2006-07-10 12:11:56]
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Re: A Shuffle and a Hidden Glance (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 12:18:28 PM AEST
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I can relate to this, I went through the same emotions in fact its like reading about my own feelings, brillliant poem... xxxx

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