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Soaring, bursting high above
No they are in his eyes
For he has fallen in love

All the swashbuckler movies
He has watched throughout the years
Has not prepared him
For the uncertainty and the tears

Football and the other sports
Don’t help him figure out
Just what she is thinking
Frustrated he could just shout

Finally he just decides
He will go with the flow
And just talk to her
He will listen and will know

Hand in hand he walks with her
Along the oceans sandy shores
Sharing dreams and wishes
Now his life needs nothing more

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He Listens

Contributed by NoSaint on Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 10:33:27 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

Fireworks flying through the air
Soaring, bursting high above
No they are in his eyes
For he has fallen in love

All the swashbuckler movies
He has watched throughout the years
Has not prepared him
For the uncertainty and the tears

Football and the other sports
Don’t help him figure out
Just what she is thinking
Frustrated he could just shout

Finally he just decides
He will go with the flow
And just talk to her
He will listen and will know

Hand in hand he walks with her
Along the oceans sandy shores
Sharing dreams and wishes
Now his life needs nothing more

Copyright Â© NoSaint ... [ 2006-07-10 10:33:27]
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Re: He Listens (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 10:44:13 AM AEST
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And what a lvoely story this poem tells!!! Very nice, I enjoyed this poem immensely!!! Brilliant!!!

2sdyx

Re: He Listens (User Rating: 1 )
by alasdaircairns on Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 12:18:23 PM AEST
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Ahhh it's really sweet. i hope she makes you this happy for a long, long time.

Re: He Listens (User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 12:46:55 PM AEST
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This is so lovely. a story of first love. Really enjoyed it. Sue x

Re: He Listens (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 04:47:42 PM AEST
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This was excellent...
Very good write..
God Bless!

Re: He Listens (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 10:57:43 PM AEST
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Sweet Shari~
A beautiful, inspiring and lovely write. Your writes always tell a story. I always look forward to ur next write my dear friend.
This one tells of what it's like when one falls in love. Absolutely beautiful.
love, hugs n prayers,
sue m

Re: He Listens (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangos on Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 04:14:43 PM AEST
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A happy ending…always nice to read one of those

Nice write

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