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Array ( [sid] => 122963 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => damn people [time] => 2006-07-09 18:28:48 [hometext] => ... [bodytext] => I kept my confidence chizzeled foremost on top grade conditions
The situations on my cinemas strip only kept me focused forced on misconception,
See the blood from the cut inspired me to finish a swift sever
And I blessed the time saved for the desperation I couldn't consider better deader,
As far as my eyes see in time I realized the right stagger could have the world crumble in a fist,
But the misfortunes set you back to saying that as an individual you could only wish,
In time I know I'll be immune to snakes bites
Because it's a group effort in the power of ones till some one crosses someone
Jive talk is what I hear in a trader's speech, and jive jesters is what I could see
Save up for the collateral, the richest heart can't survive surplus if it’s cracked it’s gonna bleed,
See it's nothing that my eyes have not seen, it is instant failure till you figure out how to pass it.
I used to have a selected few because I wanted to, now I have the selected few because I have to,
I am running out of friends like an ugly goose,
I chance my self to be gentle and I’m forced to pattern them wise and brute,
It’s never nice because I have thoughts to imply because I have to
Now it’s the choice and hard self questions like what’s the use?
If I’m feeling lucky I guess it’s something like, “I have a lot to lose”
Disregarding the relentless,
That could only hold their tainted feeling for 15 minutes
I can correlate the situations pave an understanding and never make the same mistakes
It’s because of that junkies never weaken my heart
Even though the thought killed me and they were once my considered cohorts [comments] => 1 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 16 [informant] => migueltapiajr [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )
damn people

Contributed by migueltapiajr on Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 06:28:48 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



I kept my confidence chizzeled foremost on top grade conditions
The situations on my cinemas strip only kept me focused forced on misconception,
See the blood from the cut inspired me to finish a swift sever
And I blessed the time saved for the desperation I couldn't consider better deader,
As far as my eyes see in time I realized the right stagger could have the world crumble in a fist,
But the misfortunes set you back to saying that as an individual you could only wish,
In time I know I'll be immune to snakes bites
Because it's a group effort in the power of ones till some one crosses someone
Jive talk is what I hear in a trader's speech, and jive jesters is what I could see
Save up for the collateral, the richest heart can't survive surplus if it’s cracked it’s gonna bleed,
See it's nothing that my eyes have not seen, it is instant failure till you figure out how to pass it.
I used to have a selected few because I wanted to, now I have the selected few because I have to,
I am running out of friends like an ugly goose,
I chance my self to be gentle and I’m forced to pattern them wise and brute,
It’s never nice because I have thoughts to imply because I have to
Now it’s the choice and hard self questions like what’s the use?
If I’m feeling lucky I guess it’s something like, “I have a lot to lose”
Disregarding the relentless,
That could only hold their tainted feeling for 15 minutes
I can correlate the situations pave an understanding and never make the same mistakes
It’s because of that junkies never weaken my heart
Even though the thought killed me and they were once my considered cohorts




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Re: damn people (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 06:56:00 PM AEST
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hmmm very interesting
very different then any other that i read.




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